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12.05.2025

 

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Sixteen Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

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1st place in the contest

- World consumption is increasing in line with population growth and prosperity - change light bulbs and there will be light - quote by poet Among the antiques Large aesthetic prism chandeliers will aim stars in your eyes Let us embrace this sparkling light A decorative object Each prism as a shiny mirror from rock crystal or semi-precious stones such as quartz and amber A wilderness of mirrors Crystal glasses, silver cutlery and decanters - multiplied With the prism chandelier above the table where words bloom in every celebration A timeless rhythm of togetherness amidst laughter and shared moments The ravages of time has been preserved

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Date: 5/19/2025 1:51:00 AM
Sixteen beautiful lines indeed Anne-Lise, congratulations
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Date: 5/18/2025 5:45:00 AM
Back with congrats!
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Date: 5/18/2025 5:26:00 AM
Dear Anne, back to your poem with Congratulations on your well deserved win. Hugs... :)
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Date: 5/17/2025 2:54:00 PM
Anne-Lise, wonderfully penned, love the chandelier reference and the preservation of time of family celebrations and memories. Congratulations on your first place win. -hugs
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Date: 5/17/2025 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations Anne on your poetry in this contest, I feel like it's time for dinner, alas, I have no chandelier...Frederic
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Date: 5/17/2025 10:58:00 AM
A pretty picture of a poem. I can see it hear the laughter and conversation under it!
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Date: 5/17/2025 8:47:00 AM
Exquisitely penned poem with wonderful layers of imagery. Congratulations on your well deserved contest top win, dear friend
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Date: 5/15/2025 6:04:00 AM
A gorgeously laid out table with crystal wares and chandeliers made of precious stones hung above with each stone working as a beautiful prism deflecting light in rainbow hues. Beautiful image and a lovely poem, dear Anne. Hugs :)
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Date: 5/15/2025 5:48:00 AM
Anne-Lise, interesting comment you make about changing the light source. We live in a planet that's full of spectacular views, and even the ones we make inside can be amazing as you point out. There's and allegory here for what's inside of us too. We just need to be able to see and appreciate it.
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Date: 5/13/2025 4:11:00 PM
A pretty poem! The best thing is conversation amidst the quartz, amber, and the wilderness of mirrors! Happy Tuesday, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 5/13/2025 9:21:00 AM
We require less external illumination when we discover our inner light. Beautiful depiction of internal light, Anne-Lise, well done!
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Date: 5/13/2025 7:17:00 AM
when we find the light within, we need less material shine on our own world...stunning portrayal of inner glow, anne...very nice!
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Date: 5/12/2025 11:00:00 PM
A lovely home...yes, what we wear, where we live and how, is all about capturing and expressing inner Light -- Anyway, life should be so, when we get it right. A universe of baubles out there for our offspring yet to acquire and explore. Someday, to realize, we had it all inside of us from the beginning.
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Date: 5/14/2025 11:37:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs

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