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A white dove flies gracefully across vision Shines as transparent pieces of ivory joy I give you a Candle of Love, for inspire and encourage you Blown gently upon a soft warm lovely breeze Falling slowly like a ripe apple With sad confusion, I promise you heaven Everything will fall into place and gives you, perfect pleasure of life Love whispering on wings fluttering deep It is possible to change your tomorrow, if you seek your dream today To watch the light change i pray for your beauty to return My arms are full of flowers, the beauty the unfathomable grace Reborn under a promise of color inside the mist bouquet dream Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 11.04.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 5/10/2015 6:16:00 AM
Which one wrote this? "It is possible to change your tomorrow, if you seek your dream today" That's a WOW WOW for sure...love the entire poem...Thanks
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/10/2015 6:25:00 AM
- A line to live by Judy, my line .... but I love the whole poem :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/26/2015 6:50:00 PM
This is so beautiful. Awesome words.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/27/2015 3:20:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Athena :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/19/2015 6:07:00 PM
A wonderful write my dear friend. Yours and Liam's words harmonise and blend together seemlessly to paint a glorious picture. Deserving of POTD. Love Shane xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2015 1:58:00 AM
- Always nice to see you, my friend Shane :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/19/2015 4:00:00 PM
Great poem, congratulations on Poem of the Day, :) and a 7 hugs eve
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 4:26:00 PM
- Thank you from both of us, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/19/2015 12:13:00 PM
YES! POTD! Congratulations Anne and Liam! Have a great week! :) Kim
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Date: 4/19/2015 12:27:00 PM
- Thanks for the good news, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2015 3:45:00 PM
This is a gem by both of you. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2015 10:49:00 AM
- Thank you from both of us, Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2015 8:48:00 AM
May all have lives of peace and song!!!
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Date: 4/17/2015 9:06:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Duke - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2015 12:40:00 PM
Sweet! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/16/2015 12:42:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Matthew - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2015 6:22:00 AM
Anne Lise and Liam again and again you two did so well.. :)!! the last couplet are a wow.. :)!!hugs!!i like you new avatar as sweet and lovelyp as you!//olive eloisa
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2015 6:28:00 AM
- My new avatar, will give you a picture of my last poem :) "Sweet Moon" - Thanks for the great comment at Liam and my poem - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2015 8:41:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your new collaboration..Good one..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2015 3:03:00 AM
- Always nice to see you, dear Sara :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2015 8:11:00 AM
Anne-Lise, such a dreamy poem, it flows beautifully, you both did and amazing with this write, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, my girl and me
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Date: 4/14/2015 3:02:00 AM
- So glad you enjoy it, B.W. - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2015 4:37:00 AM
That was rather charming; like a buttery piece of chocolate and caramel, rolling off of the tongue.
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Date: 4/13/2015 5:29:00 AM
- M.L. a sweet comments :) - Thanks for visiting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 9:18:00 PM
Wow, such beautiful imagery with heartfelt declarations of love...you two create magic together! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 4/13/2015 2:44:00 AM
- So glad you enjoy it, Rhonda - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 4:34:00 PM
hauntingly beautiful. Great job both to you and LIam!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2015 2:43:00 AM
- Nice to share with you, glad you liked it Andrea :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 3:00:00 PM
Liam and Anne, this poem is magical. It brings both joy and sadness, but hope reigns when the "promise of color inside the mist bouquet dream" is "reborn." Excellent collaboration! Love, Carolyn
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2015 4:01:00 PM
- Always nice to see you, Carolyn :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 2:49:00 PM
"Ivory joy" is an outstanding phrase. Julia, :)
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:53:00 PM
- Thank you, (my line :) Julia :))) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 2:41:00 PM
And I have been to Sweden, but I have always wanted to visit Norway! Its on my "todo" list!!!!!! You just make it seem more enticing!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2015 2:43:00 PM
- Sweden is good - Norway is better :))))
Date: 4/12/2015 2:29:00 PM
This is just so wonderful, I think I may wish to move to where you are!!!!!! :) xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:39:00 PM
- Welcome to Norway, Arthur :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 12:39:00 PM
Another beautiful write from you, Anne and LIam. You should make this a regular...A 7! Hugs!!! Kim :)
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:43:00 PM
- We make poems together often, it is always a pleasure :) - Kim thanks for visiting, a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 12:01:00 PM
this is a sunday treat from you and liam, anne.. lovely, wishful read.. huggs
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:04:00 PM
- Always nice to see you, Nette - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 11:43:00 AM
so beautiful and full of hope...hugs Tim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2015 11:45:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/12/2015 11:25:00 AM
What a beautiful poem! Beautiful words n thoughts. Fills me with happiness. #7
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2015 11:30:00 AM
- Nice to share with you, glad you liked it Nandita :) - Thanks for visiting, a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2015 6:10:00 PM
Hello Liam n' Anne Lise!Beautiful pens!Another wonderful collaboration penned by you my dearest friends.So beautifully written!Just dazzling!A 7+++to each!A fav! A very nice sweet poem to be held very close to ones heart.smiling.Enjoyed it!Great imagery!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely Sunday!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^" "
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Date: 4/12/2015 6:12:00 AM
- Nice to share with you, Dorian - thanks for prayers - Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2015 5:35:00 PM
:) You two have written another piece about beauty and love. Sending you both hugs...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2015 6:10:00 AM
- So glad you enjoy it, Eileen - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/11/2015 4:10:00 PM
Your heart refuses to see you in this light and directs your soul to seek more from life. Emile.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2015 6:09:00 AM
- Always nice to see you, Emile - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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