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---Bubbling Water

bubbling water swift rush over ancient stone bull frogs mating calls

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:21:00 PM

oi...good image on the frog..i dislike frogs...pd

Cory Long

Date: 6/29/2011 6:30:00 AM

As a child I would catch bull frogs this was wonderfully written. cory

Judy Ball

Date: 6/26/2011 7:28:00 PM

Oh I do love walking by a beautiful pristine stream. Great job my friend. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 4:19:00 PM

Interesting work..Bull frogs would be seeking still and more stagnated water to mate and lay their eggs though...Sara

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/25/2011 5:03:00 PM

hmm did sound like frogs to me, brook came off man made lake/pond..diffinitely could have been something else Sara

Elaine George

Date: 6/24/2011 11:50:00 AM

I hear them every evening in the pond at my neighbours house. Them and the crickets singing- a regular sympony with a backdrop of blazzing fire-flies. Ain't life grand. Great Haiku, Deb. Lainie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/24/2011 3:47:00 AM

debs, SOUP MAIL!! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 7:15:00 PM

This is nice, but my award goes to... Gray squirrel!!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/24/2011 4:31:00 AM

mine too Andie ;)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/23/2011 6:10:00 PM

Great haiku./ Not my forte. I changed the word lightning which was fouling up the meter and put in a bomb which works but is not as apt to happen on a North Dakota farm. Love Joyce

James Fraser

Date: 6/23/2011 11:49:00 AM

A write of nature at it's best Debbie, way to go :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2011 11:12:00 AM

this goes way over the 'ku limits, debs... greeeat job! for a contest?? :) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/23/2011 11:58:00 AM

okies I'm game what limit? limits? hmmm

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/23/2011 9:10:00 AM

croaking bull frogs make this piece excellent Debbie.. good luck in the contest .. the mating calls are cool too.. what do u want us to put our entry in your new contest under.. ?? I listed it ABC.. does it matter? luv..