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bittersweet vine twist like pipe curls on a finger blue birds sings bird song arias wake the sun-soaked cat napping feathers fly down laced twigs incubate the Robin’s blue eggs puss licks his whiskers lofted sparrow hawk warm basket of new born kittens noon whistle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/7/2012 3:46:00 PM
wow...super blessed and beautiful..pd
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:10:00 PM
WOW! Sensational string Haiku, Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/15/2011 3:56:00 PM
I knew Charles would pick your entry in the contest. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/15/2011 3:44:00 PM
Oh, well done indeed. The last line is perfection. Congratulations! Love, Deb
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Date: 2/15/2011 12:09:00 PM
Lovely images, Deb. Congratulations on your win in the string contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2011 8:41:00 AM
Beautiful images, well deserved win Debbie.
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:33:00 PM
this one was so filled with wonderful images. I just loved it . A big congratulations for your well deserved win, Deb!
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:59:00 PM
wowing me with your neo-classic piece on naturem debs!! THUMBS UP for the win.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:47:00 PM
I think this one is my favorite..love the very last one. BG
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:41:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy...
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:58:00 PM
Wonderful string of haikus here!Congrats Debbie on your well deserved win in this contest of Charles.
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:50:00 PM
Each one a beauty.....terrific images each leaves with me. (Love the noon whistle...such a surprise element!!!!) Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine entry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:51:00 AM
Karma? LOL very well done! I love this! ~Trudy~
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Date: 2/3/2011 3:26:00 PM
well done again....the Sparrow Hawk is a regular sighting of mine on my rural "birdwatching" jaunts....lovely...jimbo
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Date: 2/3/2011 2:32:00 AM
You sure got some gems here, Debbie! I really like your first one here, it just comes alive for me, the imagery you used here-- enjoyed reading all of them--wish you the best in the contest :) hugs
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Date: 2/2/2011 11:11:00 PM
wow, great title, great poems!! Yours is awesome, DEb,particularly that third one.Naughty naughty puss! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:36:00 PM
a lovley image your haiku brings, enjoyed this one Debbie,..p.d.
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Date: 2/2/2011 7:10:00 AM
I think the hawk is thinking of kitten food?
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:08:00 AM
Lovely string Haiku Debbie..good luck in Charles's contest .. your title is very interesting to the eye luv..
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:38:00 PM
really liked this one
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:20:00 PM
such attention to detail with some lovely abstract tones.. i love the eclectic feel of this, lights!! winner..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:58:00 PM
Nice set of haiku. I just caught an error in my work with "Roseville Sweetheart". Somehow, I missed typing in "you" in the last line.
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:37:00 PM
Well if you were a mind to use this one I would just use "Bittersweet Vine". The title is just for the sake of having one and I don't like an additional 6 or 8 syllables influencing the poem. Chas
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