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Sky Above Is Calling Me

At night,when you look up high
you see a reminiscent boundless sky
With infinite stars ,all elegantly conveying
Twinkles, zeal your mystifying imagination 
It's *****,there is nothing but a dark sky with wonders
Appealing us in life's monotony
Wish to plod to this crystal lit up
Distant bodies up there,Tempting this world
Cause of Voyager and new Horizon
Stars play and dance in my gazing
This synchronization is pounding
Zenith enhancing curious minds
Upholding us with significant bind 
These Benevolent celestial with mystique
mesmerizing me
And that sky above is calling me...



8 JUNE 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/3/2017 5:33:00 PM
Twinkles, with or put zeal mystifying your imagination: Maybe sound better and more grammatically correct. Nice thoughts.
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Date: 6/9/2016 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thankyou.....~blessed~
Date: 6/9/2016 8:15:00 AM
The beautiful Sky is calling a beautiful person...like you...a beautiful verse Lekhika...you have been summoned lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:43:00 AM
thank you...I guess I really am summoned...~blessed~
Date: 6/9/2016 6:52:00 AM
- A lovely poem, with a great voice Lekhika :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:09:00 AM
tHANK YOU.not that great than smile...
Date: 6/9/2016 5:49:00 AM
Very lovely with good imagery. When I look at the sky it's dizzying for me. It's like looking at a vast ocean. Very compelling but something I know I am not a part of. A seven from me for this well written piece. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/9/2016 6:03:00 AM
THANK YOU...~blessed~...you got it like ocean with deep mysteries..
Date: 6/8/2016 11:19:00 PM
LD, a beautifully penned poem, lovely 7~
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:28:00 PM
Thank you..BROKEN WINGS..~blessed~...

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