GOTCHA

"Tingly skies full of surprise oh how I love when with surmise, the little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art!" When I am hit by this cute cupid's arrow, I find myself writing about love and romance. I will never fight it, I must enjoy this feeling and write on. When cupid's arrow aims for you, there isn't much that you can do!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/29/2025 2:09:00 AM

This is one of the cutest poems I HAVE EVER READ - well penned and well thought out and explained in your awesome poetic way. Love it. Who can resist Cupids arrow. love and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/31/2025 12:06:00 PM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment and very kind words. My heart is wearing a smile. Thanks... Glad you found my "GOTCHA" write to be, one of the cutest poems I HAVE EVER READ. It was a ton of fun to write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 7/27/2025 4:55:00 PM

Darling poem! He shot me and his arrow went straight to me heart and right through that of my hubby over 48 years ago...powerful arrow it is, who could refuse writing of love?! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2025 10:07:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "GOTCHA" write. WOW!!! 48 years, good for you both. Love is always a great thing to write about. I enjoyed writing this fun write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

David Crandall

Date: 7/27/2025 4:52:00 PM

Nicely done. I wouldn't fight it either. In fact, I'm trying to find him, but he doesn't want to shoot me.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2025 10:04:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found my "GOTCHA" write to be, Nicely done. It was a ton of fun to write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2025 11:27:00 AM

- The sweet tingle of love, Paula :) - A wonderful poem :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/28/2025 10:03:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found my "GOTCHA" write to be, A wonderful poem. Also thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. It was so much fun to write. Hugs... Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Len Gasun

Date: 7/27/2025 12:06:00 AM

Amazing poem creatively crafted with the inspiration of the cute angel, my dear poet friend Paula. I love it a lot and enjoyed. I wanted to write one too but no time yet. So sorry for my late visit 'coz of time constraint, dear. I'll go to hospital for check-up in few min. I met a bike accident 2wks ago & still got lil pain. Hope everything will be fine soon. I'll be right back later to read more from you, ok. All the best in the contest dear. Thanks for sharing this gem. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2025 10:18:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found my "GOTCHA" write to be, Amazing poem creatively crafted. Also glad you love/enjoyed reading and for your, All the best in the contest. That makes me happy. "Thank You" I hope your hospital visit for check-up will say, you are OK. Sorry to hear about bike accident & pain. Get well very soon. Prayers/blessings going to you. Hugs... Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Anne Winter

Date: 7/26/2025 10:05:00 PM

Yess, ah, let the cupid's arrow hit you right in the spot and then everything seems so magical. You've written a beautiful poem, your writing is exquisite. I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem! Best, Anne

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2025 10:08:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found my "GOTCHA" write to be, a beautiful poem. Also glad you really enjoyed reading. That makes me happy. "Thank You" It was so much fun to write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/26/2025 9:15:00 PM

Cupid throws so many of those darts that the CDC might get involved.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2025 10:05:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "GOTCHA" write. I enjoyed writing this fun write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/26/2025 4:49:00 PM

Talk about a bruise! What the heck...mostly they heal. Take aim, my little friend! Very cute.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2025 10:04:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found this to be, Very cute. "Thank You" It was so much fun to write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/26/2025 11:49:00 AM

Very well crafted poem, Paula. I enjoy reading your metaphor layers about always-needed Cupid. Good luck with the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2025 10:02:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found this to be, Very well crafted poem. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, Good luck with the contest. It was a ton of fun to bring to life. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2025 11:27:00 AM

Great job!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/27/2025 9:59:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found this to be a, Great job. "Thank You" It was so much fun to bring this one to life. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Paul Bell

Date: 7/26/2025 4:34:00 AM

When that arrow hits the spot, it's like Robin Hood and his maid who was hot.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:08:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "GOTCHA" write. I enjoyed writing this fun write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 6:08:00 PM

Cute poetry, Paula, good luck in the contest! Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:06:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found this to be, a Cute poetry. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, good luck in the contest. It was so much fun to bring this one to life. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 5:14:00 PM

Cupid does work in strange ways and hits us unexpectedly. Cute poem...best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:04:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found it to be, a Cute poem. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, best wishes with the contest. It was a ton of fun to write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2025 1:42:00 PM

Fire away of cupid. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:02:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "GOTCHA" write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/25/2025 11:22:00 AM

Paula, a cute poem. We all need cupid's arrow sometimes.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2025 12:16:00 PM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment and found it to be, a cute poem. "Thank You" So true when you say, We all need cupid's arrow sometimes. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2025 11:19:00 AM

GOTCHA ~ Date Written:7/25/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet