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contest Rambling, Rundown, Rapture Words

sponsor Constance La France

Quote "In a world of fragrance both are caught
           trapped together when love is found"...poet
           
In her eyes, I find a warm vision
   of Heaven and Earth
where stars pierce twilight skies
and flocks of starlings burst into air
like rain drizzling from a rainbow
onto flaming fragrant flowers
   in a meadow green
where words are whispered in their softest tone
to evoke deeper passions of heartfelt trembles
that pours from every fiber into our soul
beneath romantic skies of clouds floating 
    under a red-threaded horizon
where we await the softest light of dawn
that will cover our shadows in morning dew
dripping from each blade of grass 
crushed beneath our skin
where we have loved since the moon rose
in the starry glimmering glow of night
that washed across the meadow
when love burned in our eyes 
and silence tethered our souls to paradise
as the beauty of our love ascended

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Date: 4/23/2024 5:44:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I love the music and quote too, Constance
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Date: 3/1/2024 9:49:00 AM
The Montovani piece is exceptional and pairs perfectly with your poem Frederic. A very sensuous and romantic write. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 2/14/2024 11:04:00 AM
- The beauty of love, as heaven on earth in your lines, Frederic :) - Top winner wishes for you :) - hugs
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