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contest Rambling, Rundown, Rapture Words

sponsor Constance La France

Quote "In a world of fragrance both are caught trapped together when love is found"...poet In her eyes, I find a warm vision of Heaven and Earth where stars pierce twilight skies and flocks of starlings burst into air like rain drizzling from a rainbow onto flaming fragrant flowers in a meadow green where words are whispered in their softest tone to evoke deeper passions of heartfelt trembles that pours from every fiber into our soul beneath romantic skies of clouds floating under a red-threaded horizon where we await the softest light of dawn that will cover our shadows in morning dew dripping from each blade of grass crushed beneath our skin where we have loved since the moon rose in the starry glimmering glow of night that washed across the meadow when love burned in our eyes and silence tethered our souls to paradise as the beauty of our love ascended

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Date: 4/23/2024 5:44:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive poem, I love the music and quote too, Constance
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Date: 3/1/2024 9:49:00 AM
The Montovani piece is exceptional and pairs perfectly with your poem Frederic. A very sensuous and romantic write. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 2/14/2024 11:04:00 AM
- The beauty of love, as heaven on earth in your lines, Frederic :) - Top winner wishes for you :) - hugs
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