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Persona Non Grata

I am nothing

pariah     outcast    a worm

I have nothing to offer, nothing of value

except these words

for when I see the sunlight reflect

in your chocolate brown eyes I envision 

paradise

eden   before the fall

and when you smile you 

radiate

all the colors of the rainbow

reds and yellows   indigo and violet

the lilting echo of your song moves

the flowers and trees to sway gently in 

harmony

The birds of heaven are your supportive

choir

you are my far away friend

my island girl

but the universe is tricky

full of black holes and supernovas

spiderwebs and quicksand 

navigation across time and space is

dangerous

how can I show you what I

feel

only with these words

for I am nothing

a worm

that being said

would you still love me

if I wasn't a

poet

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Panagiota Romios Date: 7/25/2024 4:18:00 PM This is great, Tom! At least you hade island Girl! Making this a Fav, truly enjoyed it, Pet! Pangie xxxxx Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 4/1/2025 1:47:00 PM Pangella? Panagiota Romios Date: 7/25/2024 7:36:00 PM ROFLMAO. Stop. You know you are not bad! Bad Girl, Pangie xxxx Tom Woody Date: 7/25/2024 6:29:00 PM Thx for checking this bad boy out Pange

Jody Mckinnon Date: 9/22/2023 1:34:00 PM What a sweet beautifully romantic poem. Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/22/2023 1:39:00 PM That's very generous thx

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 9/14/2023 9:34:00 AM You are definitely a great poet whose ink of many a colour, Tom! An immense delight and honour to be sharing such a prestigious placement! Congratulations on your honouring acknowledgement! God bless you. Best regards. Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/14/2023 9:54:00 AM I'm glad yours sat on top. Like I previously commented, it was outstanding. Thx Besma

Silent One Date: 9/13/2023 1:08:00 PM I can see you were inspired by the prompt.. I can feel the hurt in this poem the angst of a person who only has words to express their love and devotion... I do like the beginning, but I am sure you are not a pariah or outcast.. maybe a worm... lol... Your play with words give the poem further depth and i can feel the angst in your words.. The birds of heaven are you supportive choir.. love that line.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your first place.. Login to Reply Silent One Date: 9/13/2023 1:18:00 PM yes I noticed that in a couple of poems you have written recently.. Tom Woody Date: 9/13/2023 1:17:00 PM Thanks I had an interesting inspiration source This was the first of my attempts to try an entirely new style. I'm glad it resonated

Joe Maverick Date: 9/12/2023 10:35:00 PM Quite a lot of emotion here Tom, and a strong Pleasant intention.' Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/13/2023 5:24:00 AM Thx for visit Joe

David Fisher Date: 9/11/2023 5:27:00 PM Thanks for offering this poem for us to read. Surely a pleasure, and relatable in our own way! Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/11/2023 5:36:00 PM Wanting red but getting blue. Thx David

Robert Warlov Date: 9/11/2023 12:55:00 AM Lure her with ice-skates and blindfolds. Login to Reply Robert Warlov Date: 9/12/2023 4:06:00 AM Okay but devoid of the "Trust" Factor. Tom Woody Date: 9/11/2023 5:37:00 AM How about ice cream and sunsets?

Christopher Flaherty Date: 9/10/2023 4:46:00 PM Tom From 1 Worm To 1 Bugg A poetic hug Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/10/2023 4:53:00 PM Haha. I luv bugz!

Juliana Beaumont Date: 9/9/2023 12:08:00 PM If you weren't a poet, would you still be you? Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/9/2023 1:20:00 PM Ooh, that's so zen... Ommmmm

Gary Radice Date: 9/9/2023 2:26:00 AM I think a reciting of this would add even more emotion to what is already a free verse ladened with passion. I love the ending. I'm trying to think who's work this reminds me of here at The Tureen and Mr GRB comes to mind. Great read. Cheers - Gary Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/9/2023 10:24:00 AM He is a brilliant poet Gary Radice Date: 9/9/2023 6:27:00 AM Yes, the brilliant Mr. B himself. Cheers - Gary Tom Woody Date: 9/9/2023 5:55:00 AM Btw, who is GRB? Greg Barden? Tom Woody Date: 9/9/2023 5:50:00 AM I used to post quite a bit in the way of narrations and voice improvs. Maybe I'll tackle it again one day. Thx Gary

Elena Mihalachi Date: 9/8/2023 2:34:00 PM I feel you <3 Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/8/2023 4:11:00 PM Hello Elena

James Moore Date: 9/8/2023 9:03:00 AM The essence of a Sufi poem - celebrating the light within the dark! Login to Reply James Moore Date: 9/9/2023 11:55:00 AM The element of devotion to the sublime ineffable in the guise of the sensually romantic. Tom Woody Date: 9/8/2023 9:12:00 AM Interesting take. Thx for visit James

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/8/2023 6:19:00 AM I don't write good free verse, but I know it when I see it. This is excellent, Tom! Janice Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/8/2023 6:30:00 AM This is my attempt at neo poetry, line breaks and all. Thx for support janice

Susan Ashley Date: 9/7/2023 6:11:00 PM Dear Tom, you're such an original talent! Such a dramatic and enchanting display of creative poetry. I adore how your humble pen handled the prompt. Awesome imagery and emotion! I think Silent One will appreciate this as much as I do. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/7/2023 6:29:00 PM I appreciate your kind words Susan

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/7/2023 12:33:00 PM You chose a fascinating way to do that topic. Very enjoyable one. Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/7/2023 12:37:00 PM Thx Andrea. I've read many, my approach does seem a bit unorthodox. Thx for support

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/7/2023 9:17:00 AM Anyone who can write like this doesn't need the accolade, you are loved just as you are, gl in the contest, your the best Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/7/2023 9:26:00 AM Very kind thx Rose

Robert Lindley Date: 9/7/2023 6:14:00 AM As is evident, the poet's heart is clearly shown in this fine new creation. Yes, your poetry proves you are indeed a fine poet. And we know a poet writes truth about love! Even if in despair of a lost love he/she does! A gem and a fav for me. Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/7/2023 6:15:00 AM Much thanks Robert. This one is special to me, for a number of reasons

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/7/2023 3:38:00 AM Oh my,I was definitely intrigued by the rainbow-symphonies that are carved so eloquently in your splendid words.Such gorgeous descriptions here.."Sunlight reflect in your chocolate brown eyes" Wow!"When you smile you radiate all the colours of the rainbow"I love those details there."The birds of heaven are your supportive choir"So lovely!And then how you expressed the universe being tricky.This was such an intriguing read.Whether a poet or not, one's kind heart definitely attracts hope & faith.. Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/7/2023 5:12:00 AM Much thx for visiting my space Hiya

Joe Dimino Date: 9/5/2023 8:00:00 AM Just being self, the self behind the lovely poetry would be enough -- we are what we are...and then the poetry. Fine write Poet! Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/5/2023 8:33:00 AM Thx so much Joe

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/5/2023 5:20:00 AM This is great wordplay. A good way to start my day. I guess the early bird does get the worm. Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/5/2023 5:25:00 AM That's still to be determined. Thx for taking the time from your day in the sun to visit

Speaks Volumes Date: 9/4/2023 9:35:00 PM It started sad, so glad you became empowered with poetic prowess, and created such a readable, enjoyable poem. Write on ! Cheers SV Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/5/2023 4:29:00 AM Thanks much SV. Are we allowed to know your first name?

Bill Baker Date: 9/4/2023 5:04:00 PM Of course, I would. Your poetry is just a manifestation of the essence of your existence, Tom. A poets words unveil the heart and soul of the authentic spirit inside. I hope this is an entry in the contest, my friend. Intriguing title and well written as usual. Have a great week! Bill Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/4/2023 5:13:00 PM I'm happy you chose to visit me this evening Bill

Len Gasun Date: 9/4/2023 4:42:00 PM Of course my dear poet friend Tom. You've a lot of inspiring words and things to offer to make the whole world happy and always smile, for your generous creative words, an exceptional artist/ painter of the world's beauty you are, a great person to uplift and inspire and far beyond more. God bless you always my dear friend. Thanks for sharing your awesome poetry, talents and generous heart. BEst wishes always. Hugs Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/4/2023 4:44:00 PM That's very generous. Thank you

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 9/4/2023 1:31:00 PM and a poet you are, when you write like this..truly inspired writing, you were 'in the zone' writing this, that's for sure..i like the way you've formatted it, the double spacing works very well..i like everything about it, it captivates me.. Login to Reply Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 9/4/2023 1:44:00 PM you know my taste.. Tom Woody Date: 9/4/2023 1:33:00 PM I rather thought you might like this one

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/4/2023 12:37:00 PM A poet is only a small part of who you are,you are a good husband who fulfill his obligations,a hardworking person, a kind and caring friend,a funny one too...So who wouldnt be grateful to have a faraway friend like that.Thanks for being a friend Tom. Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 9/4/2023 12:51:00 PM I'm glad you found your way here Charmaine. Made my day

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