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PACKING UP HOUSE

Packing up house I do not like Much, rather fly a kite, Or go on a hike! We lived in our first home Almost forever, But in the last six years, The third and most traumatic Emotion in life, Was packing up and moving. It’s all about enduring! This home was where Our children grew up, Graduations, celebrations, Happy moments and sad Where our parents died, Where our hearts sadly sighed Where we consoled one other And cried. The empty nest syndrome was next, A huge home, echoed emptiness, So, we moved, not quite ready To be retired, But encouraged and inspired, All was in a hurry and flurry, From the old to the new, It was just a move, right, But in hindsight, It was terribly sad. hubby tried hard To cheer me up, took me out To dinner and shopping, I missed our pool, and Competing who was best At belly flopping. Hubby even bought me A labrador puppy, But I did not like our new house. Although I loved its whereabouts, Opposite a farm, With cows, horses and sheep, A calming sight, To wake and see at morning light. I unpacked with a heavy heart, We realized we had To make another fresh start. Our son found a real english Like cottage with a garden That i could envisage making Into a dream, In my minds eyes i drew Up a mystical fairy theme Four years we have, Lived here, but our son and daughter In-law, suggested we move into one Of their cottages, Oh no, another move, Yet another garden to Create and improve. But we will have our Three-year-old grand-daughter, Living near, Making our decision Ever so clear! So guess what, I’m packing again, But this time, We have won first prize, This move we feel, is wise!

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Date: 7/31/2025 5:43:00 PM
Oh, honey, your heart on paper, I feel you, emotion comes off the page (screen.) Four years have passed? Really? The new house may have represented a new chapter that painfully stated all that ended in the prior chapter. Moving has affected me greatly, always moved even as an adult it went on. If you wish, see 'cardboard boxes' and 'about this place.' I'm glad you feel 'content' now, my word, but your write relays such and content is such a powerful way to feel. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 7/29/2025 12:44:00 PM
Dear Jennifer, The bittersweet essence of change and the emotional journey of shifting houses are both explored in your amazing poetry, especially as they relate to family and memories. It highlights the happiness of family ties, especially with a grandchild, while also reflecting on the longing for a cherished former home and the difficulties of adjusting to new surroundings.
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Date: 7/25/2025 8:46:00 AM
What a wonderful "PACKING UP HOUSE" write. You told a great story. We moved many times as a child, than I have as an adult. My husband said, never again. Yes, never again. Good Luck in your New Home.... I took a week off the computer and now way behind. Have a lovely day writing away..................
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Date: 7/25/2025 11:50:00 AM
Paula my dear friend i am way, way, way behind, and I aim to take one way away, this weekend. love and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/19/2025 5:05:00 AM
A superb interesting relatable poem, old homes have so many memories attached, you have depicted and expressed that superly in rhyming wow! Kudos! Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
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Date: 7/14/2025 6:21:00 PM
I can really relate to this poem, my friend. Many moves and memories but we see one more in our future. We need to be closer to someone in our family, 150 miles is the closest in my family. and 60 to the nearest relative on Sara's side. Good luck, Jennifer. My thoughts and prayers are with you two. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/14/2025 5:27:00 AM
Reads like real life Jen. Here's hoping your next move is your last... and best!
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Date: 7/13/2025 1:20:00 PM
Sounds like it’s the right move Jennifer. It will be lovely to be near your family. Wishing you all the best… Beryl
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