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. . . smooth shades secretly serenade,

blush and blend, to send vivid vivacity.

 

- a masterpiece in the making -

 

like a painter posing with a palette,

matching the mood

of cream and Burgundy

 

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Summer shimmers, sharing a savory sweetness,

the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddles a Sangria sunset

 

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Fall, into me,

beyond the ambiance of Autumn

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like the poised position,

of a poet with a pen,

simply sculpting shapes;

softly scribbling shadows within

 

 

 

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A romantic/seasonal scribble

- Fall into my love, the love and mood of the season -

Perhaps both

Ambiance

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. . . smooth shades secretly serenade,
blush and blend, to send vivid vivacity.

- a masterpiece in the making -

like a painter posing with a palette,
matching the mood
of cream and Burgundy

**************

Summer shimmers, sharing a savory sweetness,
the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddles a Sangria sunset

____________
Fall, into me,
beyond the ambiance of Autumn
________________________

like the poised position,
of a poet with a pen,
simply sculpting shapes;
softly scribbling shadows within



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A romantic/seasonal scribble
- Fall into my love, the love and mood of the season -
Perhaps both

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Mickey Grubb Date: 9/19/2025 9:31:00 AM Wow, Brandy..."Fall, into me"...so many great lines. And, here we are again! Fall, the greatest season of the year (for me). Love this piece. ...Mickey G Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/31/2024 10:05:00 AM Romantic and softly sensuous Brandy. Nice form Very nice! :) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/1/2024 6:05:00 PM Thank you Linda, for your lovely comment. Autumn creates a beautiful, sensual mood, indeed. So sweet of you to say. I appreciate you noticing the form. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jude Herrick Date: 12/21/2023 8:23:00 PM This has the steam of a hot August night and contemplate of romance, with full creamy spectrum of palette, holding out its tongue for the rains to come. Nice work, Brandy :) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 12/24/2023 6:29:00 PM I truly love this line: ' holding out its tongue for the rains to come. ' So inviting, teasing all the senses. Thank you for saying this is steamy and romantic. You're absolutely right. Your lovely comment is appreciated. :) Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 11/17/2023 3:34:00 PM Such a lovely romantic piece of poetry, Dear Brandy, and your alliteration is just superb - natural, but magical! Enjoyed! Love and Hugs ~ Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/18/2023 4:57:00 PM Dear Malabika, thank you for saying the alliteration within is natural, but also magical. I'm enjoying the journey. Softness of the season, along with beauty and romance are tucked inside this poem. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Supraja Kannan Date: 10/21/2023 9:35:00 PM 'like the poised position, of a poet with a pen, simply sculpting shapes; softly scribbling shadows within" How beautiful!!? So beautifully penned and I loved this.... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/23/2023 8:56:00 PM It's an amazing journey, indeed. Sculpting sentences with a poet's pen, aligning alliterations and then, scribbling again. Thank you, SK. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 10/17/2023 12:26:00 PM It's so great to read your magical pen again Brandy, this is so beautiful and romantic, a gem of a write. Hope all is well with you, hugs always, Gordon Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/18/2023 7:38:00 PM So sweet of you to say, Gordon. This season is magical, in many ways. Your lovely comment brings a smile to my heart. I'm doing well, beyond busy moments. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Karen Jones Date: 10/17/2023 2:37:00 AM This is beautiful. I love fall into me. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/18/2023 7:13:00 PM Thank you, Karen. That line is the reason this poem was born. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 10/8/2023 5:12:00 PM I love your romantic, seasonal scribble my dear friend. You make me feel the ambiance of the season. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/8/2023 5:27:00 PM Thank you, John. May you continue to curl that feeling softly around you. Autumn is a beautiful season, indeed. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sam Scott Date: 10/7/2023 10:28:00 PM If I had never experienced Autumn, this would paint such a vivid picture, I would want to go there, be there, absorb every moment.. this is gorgeous :) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/8/2023 4:10:00 PM Simplicity is found in simple moments. Knowing that you're able to embrace the soft touch of Autumn through my words, leaves me breathless. Thank you Sam, for your lovely comment. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Charles Messina Date: 10/7/2023 5:54:00 PM Such beautiful poetry, Brandy. Awesome alliteration and so nicely penned. Stunning! Hope all is well, my dear friend. Hugs Charlie Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/7/2023 7:49:00 PM Thank you, Charles. 'Fall, into me," is where it all began. Embracing the season and the emotions within, quickly followed. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I'm doing well, in these moments between. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May Date: 10/6/2023 12:46:00 PM "the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddling a Sangria sunset" is the perfect setting for romance, Wonderful write Brandy, hugs Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/6/2023 7:51:00 PM Thank you Joseph, for sharing what line is your favorite. Moments around a sunrise or sunset, certainly create a romantic mood. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Bill Baker Date: 10/6/2023 7:30:00 AM Like always, Brandy, your words swirl smoothly like whipped cream and a cherry atop a bowl of ice cream. The photo as an introduction to this beautiful poem of Autumn was a delight. Heaped up leaves are so inviting ... makes me fill I have to jump in and enjoy the experience. Thanks for sharing your poetry in your unique style, my friend. A FAV for my list! Have a joyful autumn day. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/6/2023 7:45:00 PM Bill, such a delightful and delicious way to describe my poetry. (I'm blushing.) You could create something yummy with your first thought. A sweet poem. :) Yes, the photo adds to my words, indeed. It's the feeling of being surrounded by such beauty, a sensational serenade of the season. ~ That would be enjoyable, jumping into a piles of leaves ~ I'd join you, my dear friend. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I appreciate you adding this to your favorites as well. May you enjoy all the vibrant colors of Autumn. :) Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George Date: 10/5/2023 10:17:00 PM This is beauty incarnate, suiting the mood of autumn, so soul stirring ! Autumn is a seasin most people love. The romantic and sensual mood you have created is exotic. Love your wonderful penning. Also the lovely image of the girl emerging above the mound of autumn leaves. Great dear Brandy! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/6/2023 7:34:00 PM Valsa, for you to say this is beauty incarnate, leaves me in complete awe. With delicate brushstrokes, you always bring poetry to life. (It's beautiful and beyond breathtaking.) The mood within holds the soft touch of the season, along with love and romance. Sweet sensuality. The photo seemed to match the mood of the poem. Thank you for your lovely comment, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/2/2023 1:03:00 PM Too late or not, I stumbled on your poetry. Brilliant and exotic. So much imagery written with great poetic ability. Blessings. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/3/2023 7:18:00 PM Dear Victor, it has been said that good things come to those who wait. You're not late in finding my poetry. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. Within this seasonal scribble, there is a touch of sensuality. Your thoughts are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/1/2023 6:20:00 PM so much beauty and great artistry dear Brandy, you leave nothing behind, I have trailed along every word and sweet phrase you have written and loved it. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/2/2023 7:27:00 PM Vienna, inspiring images are found in the sensational season that surrounds this time of year. Its beauty is breathtaking beyond words. Thank you my dear friend, for your lovely comment. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paige Hind Date: 9/28/2023 5:08:00 PM Wow! This has me enchanted! Beautiful work! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/28/2023 7:32:00 PM It's because Autumn is very enchanting. (I'm smiling at you.) Thank you Paige, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/27/2023 2:00:00 PM so very beautiful. WOW Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/27/2023 7:10:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Christina Bowring Date: 9/23/2023 11:46:00 PM Gosh dear Brandy this is absolutely stunning. You are such an inspiring, talented poetess. Admiration to you. Such a unique take on autumn. Your creative soul knows no bounds, ‘ smooth shades secretly serenade’ ‘Summer shimmers, sharing a savoury sweetness’ - glorious alliteration. In awe of your writing!Please write more! Hugs and smiles to you :):) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/24/2023 6:48:00 PM Dear Christina, you're placing me higher than I deserve. I'm a simple poetess, simply writing from the heart. Through the years, my words have matured and with that, my poetry has bloomed. You leave me in complete awe with your lovely comment. Thank you for sharing your favorite lines. I will write more, when words find me. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs and smiles, Brandy

Susan Lawrence Date: 9/23/2023 7:36:00 PM Dearest Brandy , what a gift to fall into you , beyond the ambiance of Autumn . You have created luscious beckoning environments that I want to be a part of . Saturn sunrises ~ Sangria sunsets. Cream and Burgundy sound delicious . All of your scribbles invite … always yearning for more ! A fav! Love and hugs, Susan :) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/24/2023 6:16:00 PM Dear Susan, you humble me with all your kind words and compliments, about me and my poetry. You're able to express yourself in a way that is uplifting, inspiring and spiritual. I feel as though I'm floating, when I read your soft whispers from the heart. I'm smiling with you saying my scribbles invite, they hold a longing for more. Thank you for your lovely comment and for placing this in your favorites. :) My best to you. Hugs and love, Brandy

Arlo Parker Date: 9/23/2023 5:01:00 PM An alliteration bombshell! See you at the sangria sunset... :o) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/24/2023 6:06:00 PM Thank you, Arlo. Because, alliterations are always aligned. That's exactly where you'll find me, and my muse. :) My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Ink Empress Date: 9/23/2023 7:44:00 AM How beautiful is this, i once wrote a poem called “ poet without a pen” hah. Well i dnt remember the last time i wrote a poem with a pen. And i must say i really am in awe of your word weaving: those alliterations and the way youv paired words is beyond artistic and creative. I especially love “ sangria sunset” “ softly scribbling shadows within” smooth shades secretly serenades” ah this is soul warming! Loveeee this! Fave for me Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/24/2023 5:54:00 PM Dear Ink, the imagination is a poet's pen, along with real moments and memories. With that being said, you're an artist with words, and you leave me in awe with every masterpiece you create. Thank you for sharing your thoughts within, and for placing this in your favorites. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tom Woody Date: 9/23/2023 7:20:00 AM "Fall into me, beyond the ambiance of Autumn." Gosh, where do you come up with these great lines? Truly inspired. Cream and burgundy, colorfully delicious. A new Brandy is worth the wait Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/23/2023 7:53:00 PM Always from the heart, true feelings and emotions within. Autumn is a vibrant season and colors create a beautiful mood. Delicious- I like that word. So kind of you to say, that I'm worth the wait. Thank you, Tom. :)

Deb M Date: 9/23/2023 6:59:00 AM A lovely sweet poem Brandi….just like you Brandi!! Debx Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/23/2023 7:48:00 PM Thank you Deb, for your lovely comment. Awe, I appreciate the compliment. You're kindness doesn't go unnoticed. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Robert Lindley Date: 9/23/2023 6:36:00 AM My good friend, your poetry always has beauty, depth, and such superbly crafted fine verses! This is indeed a true gem and a very fine fav for me. May Gd bless you abundantly my good friend. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/23/2023 7:43:00 PM Robert, such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry, coming from someone that brings so many beautiful emotions to the page. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you for placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/23/2023 6:16:00 AM Summer shimmers, sharing a savory sweetness, the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddles a Sangria sunset --Fall, into me, beyond the ambiance of Autumn--- Simply beautiful my friend! A FAVE for your sculpted shapes and soft scribbles, Brandy. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/23/2023 7:39:00 PM Dear Vijay, a beautiful mood is felt, within these lines you've highlighted. Yes, they are my favorite as well. So kind of you to place this in your favorites, and to say, it's because of my 'sculpted shapes and soft scribbles." My heart is smiling. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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