Notes About The Poem

Image- Imgur.com

(Original Format)

. . . smooth shades secretly serenade,

blush and blend, to send vivid vivacity.

 

- a masterpiece in the making -

 

like a painter posing with a palette,

matching the mood

of cream and Burgundy

 

**************

 

Summer shimmers, sharing a savory sweetness,

the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddles a Sangria sunset

 

____________

Fall, into me,

beyond the ambiance of Autumn

________________________

 

like the poised position,

of a poet with a pen,

simply sculpting shapes;

softly scribbling shadows within

 

 

 

------------------

A romantic/seasonal scribble

- Fall into my love, the love and mood of the season -

Perhaps both

Ambiance

......
(PoetrySoup Format)
. . . smooth shades secretly serenade, blush and blend, to send vivid vivacity. - a masterpiece in the making - like a painter posing with a palette, matching the mood of cream and Burgundy ************** Summer shimmers, sharing a savory sweetness, the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddles a Sangria sunset ____________ Fall, into me, beyond the ambiance of Autumn ________________________ like the poised position, of a poet with a pen, simply sculpting shapes; softly scribbling shadows within ------------------ A romantic/seasonal scribble - Fall into my love, the love and mood of the season - Perhaps both
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Grubb Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Wow, Brandy..."Fall, into me"...so many great lines. And, here we are again! Fall, the greatest season of the year (for me). Love this piece. ...Mickey G
Nicole Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 1:57 PM
So wonderful that you have graced my page, Mickey. Especially this poem, because you're exactly right, fall is the best season. My heart is smiling with your lovely comment. : ) The line you highlighted just made sense. I appreciate you and your thoughts. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Fowler Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Romantic and softly sensuous Brandy. Nice form Very nice! :)
Nicole Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 6:05 PM
Thank you Linda, for your lovely comment. Autumn creates a beautiful, sensual mood, indeed. So sweet of you to say. I appreciate you noticing the form. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Herrick Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 8:23 PM
This has the steam of a hot August night and contemplate of romance, with full creamy spectrum of palette, holding out its tongue for the rains to come. Nice work, Brandy :)
Nicole Avatar
December 24, 2023 at 6:29 PM
I truly love this line: ' holding out its tongue for the rains to come. ' So inviting, teasing all the senses. Thank you for saying this is steamy and romantic. You're absolutely right. Your lovely comment is appreciated. :) Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Such a lovely romantic piece of poetry, Dear Brandy, and your alliteration is just superb - natural, but magical! Enjoyed! Love and Hugs ~
Nicole Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 4:57 PM
Dear Malabika, thank you for saying the alliteration within is natural, but also magical. I'm enjoying the journey. Softness of the season, along with beauty and romance are tucked inside this poem. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kannan Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:35 PM
'like the poised position, of a poet with a pen, simply sculpting shapes; softly scribbling shadows within" How beautiful!!? So beautifully penned and I loved this....
Nicole Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:56 PM
It's an amazing journey, indeed. Sculpting sentences with a poet's pen, aligning alliterations and then, scribbling again. Thank you, SK. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 12:26 PM
It's so great to read your magical pen again Brandy, this is so beautiful and romantic, a gem of a write. Hope all is well with you, hugs always, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 7:38 PM
So sweet of you to say, Gordon. This season is magical, in many ways. Your lovely comment brings a smile to my heart. I'm doing well, beyond busy moments. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 2:37 AM
This is beautiful. I love fall into me.
Nicole Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Karen. That line is the reason this poem was born. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:12 PM
I love your romantic, seasonal scribble my dear friend. You make me feel the ambiance of the season. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:27 PM
Thank you, John. May you continue to curl that feeling softly around you. Autumn is a beautiful season, indeed. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Scott Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 10:28 PM
If I had never experienced Autumn, this would paint such a vivid picture, I would want to go there, be there, absorb every moment.. this is gorgeous :)
Nicole Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Simplicity is found in simple moments. Knowing that you're able to embrace the soft touch of Autumn through my words, leaves me breathless. Thank you Sam, for your lovely comment. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Messina Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Such beautiful poetry, Brandy. Awesome alliteration and so nicely penned. Stunning! Hope all is well, my dear friend. Hugs Charlie
Nicole Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Charles. 'Fall, into me," is where it all began. Embracing the season and the emotions within, quickly followed. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I'm doing well, in these moments between. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 12:46 PM
"the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddling a Sangria sunset" is the perfect setting for romance, Wonderful write Brandy, hugs
Nicole Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Thank you Joseph, for sharing what line is your favorite. Moments around a sunrise or sunset, certainly create a romantic mood. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy
Baker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Like always, Brandy, your words swirl smoothly like whipped cream and a cherry atop a bowl of ice cream. The photo as an introduction to this beautiful poem of Autumn was a delight. Heaped up leaves are so inviting ... makes me fill I have to jump in and enjoy the experience. Thanks for sharing your poetry in your unique style, my friend. A FAV for my list! Have a joyful autumn day. Hugs, Bill
Nicole Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Bill, such a delightful and delicious way to describe my poetry. (I'm blushing.) You could create something yummy with your first thought. A sweet poem. :) Yes, the photo adds to my words, indeed. It's the feeling of being surrounded by such beauty, a sensational serenade of the season. ~ That would be enjoyable, jumping into a piles of leaves ~ I'd join you, my dear friend. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I appreciate you adding this to your favorites as well. May you enjoy all the vibrant colors of Autumn. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 10:17 PM
This is beauty incarnate, suiting the mood of autumn, so soul stirring ! Autumn is a seasin most people love. The romantic and sensual mood you have created is exotic. Love your wonderful penning. Also the lovely image of the girl emerging above the mound of autumn leaves. Great dear Brandy!
Nicole Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Valsa, for you to say this is beauty incarnate, leaves me in complete awe. With delicate brushstrokes, you always bring poetry to life. (It's beautiful and beyond breathtaking.) The mood within holds the soft touch of the season, along with love and romance. Sweet sensuality. The photo seemed to match the mood of the poem. Thank you for your lovely comment, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Too late or not, I stumbled on your poetry. Brilliant and exotic. So much imagery written with great poetic ability. Blessings.
Nicole Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:18 PM
Dear Victor, it has been said that good things come to those who wait. You're not late in finding my poetry. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. Within this seasonal scribble, there is a touch of sensuality. Your thoughts are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rose  Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 6:20 PM
so much beauty and great artistry dear Brandy, you leave nothing behind, I have trailed along every word and sweet phrase you have written and loved it.
Nicole Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Vienna, inspiring images are found in the sensational season that surrounds this time of year. Its beauty is breathtaking beyond words. Thank you my dear friend, for your lovely comment. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Hind Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 5:08 PM
Wow! This has me enchanted! Beautiful work!
Nicole Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 7:32 PM
It's because Autumn is very enchanting. (I'm smiling at you.) Thank you Paige, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 2:00 PM
so very beautiful. WOW
Nicole Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 7:10 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Bowring Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 11:46 PM
Gosh dear Brandy this is absolutely stunning. You are such an inspiring, talented poetess. Admiration to you. Such a unique take on autumn. Your creative soul knows no bounds, ‘ smooth shades secretly serenade’ ‘Summer shimmers, sharing a savoury sweetness’ - glorious alliteration. In awe of your writing!Please write more! Hugs and smiles to you :):)
Nicole Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Dear Christina, you're placing me higher than I deserve. I'm a simple poetess, simply writing from the heart. Through the years, my words have matured and with that, my poetry has bloomed. You leave me in complete awe with your lovely comment. Thank you for sharing your favorite lines. I will write more, when words find me. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs and smiles, Brandy
Lawrence Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 7:36 PM
Dearest Brandy , what a gift to fall into you , beyond the ambiance of Autumn . You have created luscious beckoning environments that I want to be a part of . Saturn sunrises ~ Sangria sunsets. Cream and Burgundy sound delicious . All of your scribbles invite … always yearning for more ! A fav! Love and hugs, Susan :)
Nicole Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Dear Susan, you humble me with all your kind words and compliments, about me and my poetry. You're able to express yourself in a way that is uplifting, inspiring and spiritual. I feel as though I'm floating, when I read your soft whispers from the heart. I'm smiling with you saying my scribbles invite, they hold a longing for more. Thank you for your lovely comment and for placing this in your favorites. :) My best to you. Hugs and love, Brandy
Parker Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:01 PM
An alliteration bombshell! See you at the sangria sunset... :o)
Nicole Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Arlo. Because, alliterations are always aligned. That's exactly where you'll find me, and my muse. :) My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 7:44 AM
How beautiful is this, i once wrote a poem called “ poet without a pen” hah. Well i dnt remember the last time i wrote a poem with a pen. And i must say i really am in awe of your word weaving: those alliterations and the way youv paired words is beyond artistic and creative. I especially love “ sangria sunset” “ softly scribbling shadows within” smooth shades secretly serenades” ah this is soul warming! Loveeee this! Fave for me
Nicole Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Dear Ink, the imagination is a poet's pen, along with real moments and memories. With that being said, you're an artist with words, and you leave me in awe with every masterpiece you create. Thank you for sharing your thoughts within, and for placing this in your favorites. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
M  Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:59 AM
A lovely sweet poem Brandi….just like you Brandi!! Debx
Nicole Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 7:48 PM
Thank you Deb, for your lovely comment. Awe, I appreciate the compliment. You're kindness doesn't go unnoticed. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:36 AM
My good friend, your poetry always has beauty, depth, and such superbly crafted fine verses! This is indeed a true gem and a very fine fav for me. May Gd bless you abundantly my good friend.
Nicole Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Robert, such a wonderful thing to say about my poetry, coming from someone that brings so many beautiful emotions to the page. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you for placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:16 AM
Summer shimmers, sharing a savory sweetness, the sultry Saturn sunrise, swaddles a Sangria sunset --Fall, into me, beyond the ambiance of Autumn--- Simply beautiful my friend! A FAVE for your sculpted shapes and soft scribbles, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Dear Vijay, a beautiful mood is felt, within these lines you've highlighted. Yes, they are my favorite as well. So kind of you to place this in your favorites, and to say, it's because of my 'sculpted shapes and soft scribbles." My heart is smiling. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
One Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 3:30 AM
You always have a wonderful way with words.. You do not write much, but always a treat when you post your delicate poems.. great alliteration in this one.. Love these lines.. like the poised position, of a poet with a pen, simply sculpting shapes; softly scribbling shadows within...
Nicole Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Dear Silent One, even though my muse stays hidden for longer than I wish, when she graces me with her presence; I'm content. Thank you for saying my poems are delicate, and; that I have a "way with words." So kind of you to share what lines you love the most. I'm enjoying the way alliterations curl around my muse. My best to you. :) Brandy
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace