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keep.goghing
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3/22/2018 1:38:55 PM
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Gods Mirror
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You could definitely amp up your vocabulary and use more literary devices besides rhyming in this. I don’t feel as though this is a very sophisticated poem just because it’s a little bland, but other than that your rhyming pattern is very consistent and well done.
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3/22/2018 1:44:39 PM
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Empowerment
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Lovee the similes, metaphors, and rhyming here. You could emphasize your imagery a little more just to make it a more entertaining poem, but other than that it’s pretty well-written.
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