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3/5/2018 12:10:24 PM Deborah Finneran Posts: 1	God’s Mirror God’s eternal mirror, hold it in your hand. Look at who you are, & all that He has planned. You are so grand, a child of infinite worth. You are His eternal child, residing on this earth. Remember, remember, who you are… Looking through His mirror, your reflection reaches far…
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3/8/2018 8:03:37 PM Jessica Amanda Salmonson Posts: 5	It's too much syrup for me, makes my teeth hurt, but I assume religious fanatics would enjoy it.
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3/13/2018 10:30:30 PM Sue Silverlight Posts: 2	Im not a religious but I like this a lot. the "&" is weird tho
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3/22/2018 1:38:55 PM CJ Bishop Posts: 2	You could definitely amp up your vocabulary and use more literary devices besides rhyming in this. I don’t feel as though this is a very sophisticated poem just because it’s a little bland, but other than that your rhyming pattern is very consistent and well done.
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4/16/2018 9:20:50 PM JW Nugent Posts: 8	I like it
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