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1/29/2018 3:41:42 PM
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A Mothers Love
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Kelly, I like the beautiful sentiments expressed in this poem. Any mother would enjoy this poem.
I think the poem could be enhanced by applying punctuation and correcting the punctuation in certain stanzas.
For instance, the two sentences in the first stanza should end with periods, and not question marks.
Other than the punctuation (or the lack thereof ), this poem is a gem. I like it.
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