Poetry Forum
Lenna Ann
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5/9/2017 5:10:28 PM
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How do I get more comments/opinions from readers
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how do I delete this thread?
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5/9/2017 5:21:23 PM
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Sounds
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It mays sound smoother if you remove the 2nd and 3rd time you wrote the lines that read "Of laughter in the moonlight. Just a suggestion, tho not necessary.
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