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Sam Lineham - all messages by user

6/25/2016 9:57:33 PM
Feedback is much appreciated	Hi There, I'm new to this site but have been writing poetry as a hobby since adolescence. I've joined a few different poetry sites in order to get feedback and read other poetry to try and improve my writing. While poetry is a hobby that I keep mostly to myself outside of work and university, I have always been interested in the opportunity to improve and participate within the poetry community. Regards, Tina
6/25/2016 10:04:42 PM
Critique	Hi there, I'm always very open to receiving helpful feedback in any form to try and improve. Any feedback would be much appreciated. I've copied one of my poems bellow that I would like to improve. The world is a filter for the finest Naturally divided, Refined in detail, To strike revenge, To falter is to fail Now the frail remains of our undoing are cremated In his image The universe implodes Only the finest will be saved, The rich and the richer Those who spill blood, Not their own, Those who reap what the poor have sown The faces behind the Nations finest Haunt the dead and dying. Please feel free to read and critique my other poems posted on my page. Regards, Tina
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