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3/15/2013 3:04:43 PM
Howdy Y'all	My name is Jacob. I joined the Soup about three weeks ago and I thought I would introduce myself. I predominantly wrote short stories, and then one day I decided to give poetry a shot and have really enjoyed it. I live a wonderfully plain and happy life and writing has been a fantastic creative outlet for me. I have posted a few poems and I would love for anyone and everyone to read them. I welcome and appreciate any comments or criticism that you may have and I look forward to reading a lot of other Souper's work as well. Thanks.
3/16/2013 6:50:08 AM
Howdy Y'all	Hey thanks! I look forward to reading some of your work too Juanita.
3/20/2013 12:58:53 PM
Squatches In My Mind	I know that you now reside, In the tundra of my mind. I know your eyes can see, The decadent dangers inside of me. It shoots ice straight through your spine. Knowing what the foliage of my mind, Can do to make you squatches whine. You let out a hideous wail. As your face begins to pale. Your cerebral cave of jagged shale, Slowly crumbles, starts to fail. Your fear grows quickly by the hour. As sinister daffodils take your power. Of your recent kill, the meat turns sour. As you realize this place, by far is fouler. Your arms and legs turn to lead. Your stomach flutters growing dread, Your realizing the dangers in my head. That my imagination has now fed. Your lost in overwhelming splendor. At the sight of my terrifying Render. With her body supple and slender, She burns you, through her eyes of ember. You crumple to the floor, while crying. As she floats forward, carried on undying. She glances up, over shoulder sighing. At the sight of sterling stars aligning. Render: “Hello hunter welcome to <em>His</em> wood.” On wobbly squatch stilts you stood. Squatch: “Who is <em>His</em>? If you would.” Render: “<em>His</em>, is the creator of this wood, And in here all evil and good.” So you stand their patiently listening. To the figment of my inner whispering. To the startling revelation of your fears. You are one of many monsters in here.
4/18/2013 6:51:11 AM
Has anyone else had poetry deleted by PoetrySoup?	Are the two lines your whole poem? If so under the rules I personally don't think it warrants being deleted. To me you are just expressing your opinion not engaging in hateful expressions. I don't see it as a violation of any of the below content guidelines. Are you positive it was deleted? Have you tried posting it again? Posting poems containing this content will result in immediate deletion of your poetry and possible membership suspension. Examples of unacceptable content or subjects are: Sexually Explicit (X-Rated) Language Personal Attacks, Battles, or Slamming Soup Members (Do not use a member's name in poems or comments - unless it is positive!!!) Profanity (Curse Words or Abbreviated Curse Words) Nasty Comments (E.g. "This is CRAP!!!") Vulgarity Hateful Expressions (E.g. "I should have killed her") Racism
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