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9/23/2012 8:59:40 AM
Posting a poem for critique	I posted my poem and it showed under new poems, but not under the Be Gentle critque. (Which is were I wanted it to be). Any suggestions?
9/23/2012 11:17:09 AM
My Love - Poem Type, Suggestions	My Love You found me when my heartwas lost, But now it is nevermore. Faith is no longer a wordwithout meaning, And my tears are no longer streaming. No light nor dark touches myface, There is air for me tobreathe. Love is now in my life, And I have skin upon myskin. When you pulled me from my wreckage, I am thankful I let you in. You always see past thebeast within me, We never have to beginagain. My cheeks are dry, my heartalways beats, And you are the sun thatshines. Because I promised to alwayslove you , And feed you years of joy. Never will I leave you…… Because I will always be Mrs. Holly Moore. Mrs. Moore – 2/14/11
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