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Dangeja - all messages by user

9/18/2012 8:58:48 PM
Critics makes you grow Dear poets,



I am new in the poetry world, besides English is not my first language, therefore all critics will be welcome.

Thank you all

regards

Daniela
9/18/2012 9:14:04 PM
In the valley of times surrender Hi Alexander,
You started amazingly well, but I think you should have finished on the fifth strophe. The last sentence of the poem lives it unfinished, so I think. Please correct me if I am wrong...
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