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Dangeja
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9/18/2012 8:58:48 PM
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Critics makes you grow
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Dear poets,
I am new in the poetry world, besides English is not my first language, therefore all critics will be welcome.
Thank you all
regards
Daniela
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9/18/2012 9:14:04 PM
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In the valley of times surrender
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Hi Alexander,
You started amazingly well, but I think you should have finished on the fifth strophe. The last sentence of the poem lives it unfinished, so I think. Please correct me if I am wrong...
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