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3/7/2012 7:29:03 PM
This is my first ever poem, Just be honest with me nufcnick wrote:
I’ve seen you so many times
But every time I do.
It happens all over again
I fall in love with you.
Every time I see you
You put a smile on my face.
Every time I see you
My heart it starts to race.
I love the way you smile
And the way you play with your hair.
I love the way you smell
And the way you always seem to care.
Your lips look so soft
Soft enough to kiss.
So when you have to go away
It’s you I always miss.
I love that your so beautiful
And to this you don‘t think true.
I guess what I’m trying to say
Is… I love you.
2/3/2013 9:15:03 AM
Blue onedaypigswillfly wrote:
Hey everyone, I'm 16 and this is my first poem that i've ever posted. I would like to know your thoughts, and thank you for your time!


The night is dark and silent

The thoughts come rolling in

And hour after hour

I wonder where you've been

If you ever think of me

In this deep dark night?

As when the moon above us shines

It's possible that you might

At one point we were one

So long ago it seems a crime

But our bond is of a love

One that will outlast time

If I ever saw you again

I'd ask how you've been keeping?

All I'd need is just one look

Our time all too fleeting

To say that I don't miss you

Would be an outright lie

Without you I am lost

I'm barely getting by

I wonder where you are

When we're so far apart

You're already gone

But never from my heart

I can't ever let it out

Or the sadness will grow

So until we meet again

It's best you don't know

So it's at night in the darkness

Where I think of you

And the night isn't black

But a dark shade of blue
2/3/2013 9:17:15 AM
Blue Love your poem, very mature writing for a 16 year old. Good work
10/20/2013 8:28:35 AM
im new to this site, here is my 1st post -Why!?- Good work Jose, I like what your topic is about, something truly needs to be done.
5/20/2017 9:56:27 PM
New form of poetry Poem within a poem rhyme I think it's a very good poem, good job.
5/20/2017 10:20:52 PM
Published Books I have a published book of poetry entitled Guided By Grace. The book has inspirational poetry and

insights. published by Jazzy Kitty Publishing. I am currently working on my second book for publication.
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