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Malika10
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2/3/2013 9:15:03 AM
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Blue
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onedaypigswillfly wrote:
Hey everyone, I'm 16 and this is my first poem that i've ever posted. I would like to know your thoughts, and thank you for your time!
Blue
The night is dark and silent
The thoughts come rolling in
And hour after hour
I wonder where you've been
If you ever think of me
In this deep dark night?
As when the moon above us shines
It's possible that you might
At one point we were one
So long ago it seems a crime
But our bond is of a love
One that will outlast time
If I ever saw you again
I'd ask how you've been keeping?
All I'd need is just one look
Our time all too fleeting
To say that I don't miss you
Would be an outright lie
Without you I am lost
I'm barely getting by
I wonder where you are
When we're so far apart
You're already gone
But never from my heart
I can't ever let it out
Or the sadness will grow
So until we meet again
It's best you don't know
So it's at night in the darkness
Where I think of you
And the night isn't black
But a dark shade of blue
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2/3/2013 9:17:15 AM
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Blue
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Love your poem, very mature writing for a 16 year old. Good work
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10/20/2013 8:28:35 AM
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im new to this site, here is my 1st post -Why!?-
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Good work Jose, I like what your topic is about, something truly needs to be done.
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5/20/2017 10:20:52 PM
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Published Books
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I have a published book of poetry entitled Guided By Grace. The book has inspirational poetry and
insights. published by Jazzy Kitty Publishing. I am currently working on my second book for publication.
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