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12/5/2011 6:08:32 PM
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I need to contact your general help column...
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I need to find out how to post to a given forum...in this case High Critique
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5/1/2012 9:13:46 AM
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How do I get readers?
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I have been here, for several months, and no one has commented on my work. What do I need to do?
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5/1/2012 12:49:50 PM
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Hello
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Hi...you seem to know your way around, so I wonder if you would help me. After several months absent from the site, I seem to be unable to make me new poems appear, even though I clicked the Submit button. Do you know what I might be doing wrong?
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5/1/2012 1:54:05 PM
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Please, don't hold back! One time around
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I think it is too much to give us a single purpose to the poem. Why not take just a single aspect of the day, and reflect on that! The poem would then not only be shorter (which would be effective in this piece---not always of course) and would not only sustain interest, but allow you to express your feelings about it more completely. In other words the poet needs to show him/herself more. That gives it some drama and some emotional appeal here, which the title promises, but does not deliver effectively.
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6/13/2012 2:13:41 PM
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How do I get readers?
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I cannot post at all! Poetry submissions do not show up.
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9/7/2012 11:13:48 AM
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I write poems and record EVPs on the side? :)
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i AM INterested in the same things you are!
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8/10/2013 4:43:49 PM
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In My Skin
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I'd like to see some punctuation. And your concluding stanza is somewhat abrupt. It might be effective to surprise us with something like a declaration of the value of that premise--some little twist at least, that gives us something to think about. -Dean
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5/5/2017 3:11:16 PM
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formatting
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how do I enter in this forum?
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