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Maria Lynn - all messages by user

3/31/2011 7:12:42 PM
Hello	Hello, I am glad to have found this site. I have read some really good work today and I plan on reading many more as time goes by. I hope to learn and grow as a writer and perhaps along the way I can give something useful to another writer. Thank you for being so welcoming so far. Have a good night everyone
3/31/2011 7:26:02 PM
Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer	Can you save me Save me save me Save Me Lift me out of this hole Give life to my soul Help me find my dreams Put an end to the screams Can you save me Save me save me Breath hope into my lungs Stop the demons from speaking in tongue Reaching for you with all my might I need you to hold on tight Can you save me Save me save me Will you battle with the gloom So I can step out of this tomb Bring salvation to my spirit I’m desperate, can’t you hear it? Can you save me Save me save me In your image I need to be born again God, can you wash away my sins I’m on my knees begging , praying Trying to ignore what the devil is saying Can you save me Save me save me For my misdeeds I atone All my life I thought I was alone I realize that I was wrong In your divine arms I belong Can you save me Save me save me Oh, God I know you’re here I give myself unto you without fear Please Lord God save me Can you save me Save me save me edited by Maria Lynn on 3/31/2011
4/6/2011 10:41:35 AM
Save Me Thanks for any critique you can offer	Thank you all for your time and critiques @Susan Burch I wrote it as a poem, however some people think it could work as lyrics.
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