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1/9/2011 1:32:13 AM
Alpha Betrayed	Are we simply caricatures of I Skulking self behind the skull in thoughts and process ticking by, far beyond the Alpha Beta too describe. Instilling any eay, no exact way Feeling All, percieved by you. Fitting this enigma into the parameters of language; willing tho flawed in transcribing the flitting connections gathered beyond the grasp of the others, In turn trapped to sprout their skewered insights ... missing , always , what you meant.
7/3/2011 8:51:03 PM
Checklist Critique	looking for critique on this piece ----------------------- I said welcome him in colonel pepper. let our guest enjoy it while it lasts crooked nicotine stains showing where to dust off your boots Now we're getting somewhere with this gold- leaf checklist all prompt & ready to board 1/ Fill the Ashtray. 2/ Sharpen the Pencils 3/ Remember to Exhale. Zero/ Remember to move. For isn't that the hardest part to living , the actual living part, no matter to the fact we're all locked away for safekeeping. Torchs pre lit for the next flame war screeching Douche over the bricked up Alley kitterns mewl like stuck pigs struggling below swamp. backed fur & all that Jazz. Top cat isn't here anymore as the SFX department handles the kiddie shows now. In human forms parading on screen snatched into an ultra violet world caught all stop motion. I wish we could all stop a moment pick it apart and see what really went down beyond all this he say she say business spinning lines from stardust.
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