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1/14/2023 5:49:58 AM
Reply with a limerick - let's see where it goes!	a young girl name of pearl was so shiny, from her cheeks, to her breasts to her hi-nee, but a problem so simple, a small purple pimple, left her hateful and rude and too whiny! edited by john o'zemko on 1/14/2023
1/20/2023 7:41:33 AM
Sonnet Oz1	Beagles’ breath I love now as I awake. Your wet tongue keenly laps my chin and brow. I know your love is true and full, not fake. You impart your joy and love to me now. The battles of the night have bled away. And my eyes can blink back to life once more. “Good girl!” in gravel tones aloud I say. Then lean up fast to grasp your furry maw. Best friend to me and I to you am proud. Even our soaring love as such must fail. As ruin will likely wrap you in a shroud. In pain of grief sorrowfully I’ll wail! Doing as I’ve done each time before death Has brought me to the fatal edge of doom I selfish, will seek to find one who’s breath Will kiss me to raise my heart from the gloom!
1/20/2023 7:42:03 AM
Sonnet Oz1	Most interested in crit
2/2/2023 9:42:07 AM
Sonnet Oz1	Thanks. Please suggest such as I should read to improve my work. Thanks OZ
2/23/2023 4:39:08 AM
Sonnet Oz1	Thank you Dilly. Always happy am I when something I've penned gets a read and a comment. OZ
2/28/2023 4:49:57 AM
Who Are You?	I don't see any images in this piece. Is double spaced lines needed?
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