You Say You Want a Revolution JUDGED

Hi everyone,

Like so many people, I'm apprehensive about the world situation. Our Presidential election has succeeded in making the whole world more fearful than ever before. Allies are wondering if we still are allies? Russia is happy with the new President. [ In what universe are Americans safe when Russia approves of our governing choices?]  The United States has active duty military troops stationed in nearly 150 countries. As you can see REVOLUTION is no stranger to the USA.

The entries in my contest were very thought provoking. I did not take form, or structure, or even grammar into consideration, only content. Had I taken these things into consideration [as an editor would] I would not have been able to come up with 10 winners. Please, for your own sake, work harder on your grammar, the structure of your writing [the line layout, the stanza breaks] even something as simple as the title for your work [The title is a most important tool & makes your first impression. All 4 letter words should be Capitalized. The title should add something to the readers understanding.]

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Please hold your hearts in your hands & READ these words of understanding & confusion. Think about your own feelings and why you have them.

Light & Love Always

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