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My 2nd book "Wistful Thoughts" is now available through Amazon or from over 36,000 bookshops world wide

Product Details I was lucky enough from 2 years old to mainly live first in Las Palmos then at 8 we moved to Tanganika whIch was a wonderful place to live and I saw many things and had great experiences My poem Walk with me tells of some of them and left me with a great love of nature

I have now written 4 books with a 5th on its way then I think I may call it a day as I am not in the best of health life can be a stuggle And my 75 th birhday is in March

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Villanelle contest

Blog Posted by Shadow Hamilton: 12/15/2023 12:13:00 PM

It seems a few people are struggling to write a true villanelle

so I suggest that you take a look at "The Lovers" which was poem of the week that is a true villanelle. It is a very hard form to write in but very satifsing when you get it right. Good Luck to all contestants. Hope this helps you Shadow 



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Date: 12/16/2023 12:28:00 PM
Shadow, I like Villanelle and the repetition of lines, and will do my best, thanks for inspiring me, blessings
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Date: 12/15/2023 12:48:00 PM
What have most of them done wrong? Is it meter or is it more the form?
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Craig Cornish
Date: 12/16/2023 7:04:00 AM
Actually meter is not required in a Villanelle, though some consistency in line length produces better flow and appearance. Mid-Nineteenth century poets tended to favor iambic tetrameter (while not required) and twentieth century poets like Dylan Thomas (as evidenced in the Poetry Soup example), more commonly used iambic pentameter - again, meter has never been a requirement though, since it originated in early 17th century France as a song, some type of rhythm was usually used. It's interesting that many poetry forms started as songs many centuries ago, but not surprising.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2023 1:42:00 PM
A bit of both lines count is off in some rhyme in others most are ok. It is hard form to write in hugs Shadow

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