Debbie Guzzi
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Deborah Guzzi writes full time. Her third book, The Hurricane is available through Prolific Press. https://prolificpress.com/bookstore/prolific-books-c-12/the-hurricane-by-deborah-guzzi-p-151.html Her poetry appears in Allegro, Artificium, Shooter, & The Foxglove Journal in the UK, Subterranean Blue, Existere, The Ekphrastic Review, Scarlet Leaf Review & Subterranean Blue Poetry, Canada - Tincture, Australia - mgv2>publishing, France Cha: Asian Review, China - Vine Leaves Literary Journal, Australia - The Scarlet Leaf Review - Greece, Ribbons, pioneertown, Sounding Review, Bacopa Literary Review, The Aurorean, Liquid Imagination, The Tishman Review, Page & Spine & others in the USA. 

So few Words yet such a difficult Task

Blog Posted by Debbie Guzzi: 10/1/2012 1:47:00 PM

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Date: 10/2/2012 1:31:00 PM
I spent years not knowing what the heck FORM???? I was writing in and it really annoyed me. My sis is an English teacher and she say these are good poems Deb I'd say thanks what kind of poems and she's say hmmmmmmmm. OK now here we are this site has a fantastic FORM DICTIONARY and many learned folk there is really no reason not to find OUT what form you have written in
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Date: 10/2/2012 11:28:00 AM
A very interesting write. I'll have to think about this one. Cool!
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Date: 10/2/2012 11:14:00 AM
Hmmmm... hasn't and isn't haiku and its definition been evolving for quite some time? I'm not sold that writing in a form is OBJECTIVE, but I do believe that learning how to write in an objective manner does strengthen one's writing skills. Check out this book http://books.google.ca/books/about/The_Unswept_Path.html?id=yLqdNxt5e-cC&redir_esc=y The preface is very interesting. Also, simple and uber cool: http://www.slideshare.net/butwait/defining-haiku-presentation
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Date: 10/2/2012 9:11:00 AM
I also feel it is a worse disrespect to intentionally write something knowing that you are going to call it a form which it is not. That really chafs my loins, but who am I. Just my two cents worth.
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:58:00 AM
Deb, I just sent you an email.
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:33:00 AM
I defininitely feel a lack of respect and laziness is partially the cause for mislabeling any poem. Haiku and senryu are more often mislabeled than other form, probably. I also feel it is a higher disrespect to label something ANY form when the poet does not research far enough to know what they are talking about. When i first got on the soup I was super hesitant to make any definitive statement about anything because I knew so little of about the forms which intesested me.
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Date: 10/2/2012 7:57:00 AM
Hmmmm...:-)
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Date: 10/2/2012 6:12:00 AM
Carol hon I love you too, and just ignore the Debbie, but I do think folks have made progress in their haiku writing, many of us have tried to help there and now most on the site at minimum do not #1 say Haikus ;) #2 do not use capitalization [except for proper nouns] #3 understand two of the lines must be grammatically connected as well as conceptually. HUZZAH...the next step is to understand the difference between subjective and objective [and this will help all their writings. It will help their LIFE. YOUR opinions are not TRUTHS they are your truths not universal truths and not to be put in a haiku.
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Date: 10/2/2012 6:04:00 AM
Rueben can I give you a long distance SSMMMOOOOOOCHHH! The reason I am speaking of FORM, and not content, is that whether content is good or bad, impacting or boring is SUBJECTIVE, whether you have writen a poem correctly in a form is OBJECTIVE. FORM does matter, sloppy form leads to slopping writing, leads to lack of communication, and even the poet doesn't get what they want because they are NOT understood.
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Date: 10/2/2012 12:51:00 AM
I admit to ignorance over some forms but life goes on on and we earn all the time, this has helped me a great deal thank you Debbs xx
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:34:00 PM
Hey, hon, sent you a soup mail and I have put up a poem with a call out for editing help. I turned the lines somewhat, but more importantly did I really capture what I wanted? Did it seal that minute into a tiny poem? All help welcome and TRULY appreciated. I'm hoping this gets minds turning, hon. xox
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:37:00 PM
I do not recall ever reading a book of poems where the form was labeled. I thought that was for the crtitics to have something to talk about.
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:42:00 PM
Anyways it's good to have more knowledge. Thanks Debbie.
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:40:00 PM
They mislabeled Mislabel.
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:37:00 PM
I totally agree with Cyndi. It is like everything else in life everyone sees things differently. That is what makes the world go around. Just like 3 people can read your poem and each see it as meaning something else. I am so tired of seeing blogs going up about Haiku and Senryu. I think it has run it's course. Just my ten cents worth. You know I loves ya babe. Carol
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:30:00 PM
For me, hon, the most important aspect of every, no wait make that EVERY poem is its content. How does the poem move? Does it flow, captivate, energize, emote? Does it make me think, rethink, laugh or cry? Does the poet have a voice, a style? Does the poem surprise me, delight me? Is the verse free of cliche and excess description, redundancy, pretence??? If the poet has done this, if the poem has truth AND beauty OR truth OR Beauty, then that is ALL that matters. Nothing else does. This is where I come from. This is my belief. gota faly
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:18:00 PM
You do what you do for a reason, that's the big difference Dee. Yes a mistake is simply another way of doing things BUT what is it that is being done then becomes the question.
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:13:00 PM
Good blog, Bet. Yup. You're definitely Bet here. :-) A quote I like:A mistake is simply another way of doing things- Katherine Graham. I'm currently working on a ballade,. I am not adherring to the syllable count, I am also playing with the repeated line, somewhat. Some rhyme will be slant. However, the scheme is 100% ballade. I will call it a ballade. It is a ballade. It is MY ballade. I doubt my readers will think, "Now, why did she label this a ballade?" This wouldn't be a mislabel. I don't believe that forms are stagnant. Poetry is constantly being wrought and bent. It is one of the things which makes it lovely. Some of my fave poets knew this, too. Glad your b.d. was a blast.
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Joann Grisetti
Date: 10/1/2012 6:36:00 PM
I agree with you here.
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Patricia Ellis
Date: 10/1/2012 3:18:00 PM
The same for me, I am still learning..
Date: 10/1/2012 2:51:00 PM
If I make a mistake I truly WANT to be told. If friends don't tell me I feel like they let me walk around with toilet paper hanging from the back of my skirt...I hate feeling foolish! ;)
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Patricia Ellis
Date: 10/1/2012 3:20:00 PM
The same for me, I am still learning..sorry it ended up on the wron comment..see still learning !
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David Williams
Date: 10/1/2012 3:09:00 PM
you know you can tell me anytime you like, I too hate feeling foolish ...David
Date: 10/1/2012 2:18:00 PM
Debbie, good blog, I do think some poets mis-label their work, but I do not think it is intentional ergo I don't think they are trying to 'lure' them in, maybe I am wrong..hope you had a good birthday and a cup of Assam to celebrate...David
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