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All of Me Pt2

How dare you change your mind
and stop loving me, when i gave you everything.
How dare you smile and laugh with her,
while I am left with all the pain.
How dare you comment that I am the one to blame,
when you cheated, lied and played your mind games.
It hurts to breath sometimes, yet I take pride
in the fact that each breath I take proves
I can live without you.
I'm taking back my feelings because the saddest
thing in the world is loving someone who used
to love you.
I swear honey I don't miss you, I miss who I
thought you were kind, beautiful and worthy
of my heart.
High off of love once, now in a downward spiral
yet I am grateful we were once connected.
Crazy some may say but I like the way it hurts,
you have taught me the hardest lesson of love,
it coldly ends but the fire is worth the pain.

Copyright © Laurie Smith | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 7/16/2016 12:40:00 AM

well said, Laurie. linda
Date: 7/12/2016 7:14:00 AM

Laurie, good one... skat
Date: 7/12/2016 2:06:00 AM

Very well expressed interlocking of pang and love ... A good poem .... some metaphors you could have embellished with ...

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