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All of Me Pt2

How dare you change your mind and stop loving me, when i gave you everything. How dare you smile and laugh with her, while I am left with all the pain. How dare you comment that I am the one to blame, when you cheated, lied and played your mind games. It hurts to breath sometimes, yet I take pride in the fact that each breath I take proves I can live without you. I'm taking back my feelings because the saddest thing in the world is loving someone who used to love you. I swear honey I don't miss you, I miss who I thought you were kind, beautiful and worthy of my heart. High off of love once, now in a downward spiral yet I am grateful we were once connected. Crazy some may say but I like the way it hurts, you have taught me the hardest lesson of love, it coldly ends but the fire is worth the pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 12:40:00 AM
well said, Laurie. linda
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Laurie Smith
Date: 7/23/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback.
Date: 7/12/2016 7:14:00 AM
Laurie, good one... skat
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Date: 7/12/2016 2:06:00 AM
Very well expressed interlocking of pang and love ... A good poem .... some metaphors you could have embellished with ...
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