Walls Start Closing In Poems | Examples


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After Six

surrounded by space
 
       in a soundtrackless cinéma vérité;

long stares out of the window,

             cigarettes after sex;

       finally, she whispers, 'do you love only me?'

             the question remains unanswered

                     while seasons fade.

the walls start closing in,

       echoing the decade of quietude;

the busy streets outside remain,

              stiff gins after six;

       finally, she sighs, 'do you still love me?'

 
               and while seasons fade,

                      the question remains.

Our Will To Answer

Fear, the ghost of indecision
where darkness stalks each day

Confusion our ignoble master,
bewildered we fall prey

Terror caught in nightly doldrums,
the walls start closing in

As choices wait our will to answer
—or die this fate within

(Villanova Pennsylvania: July, 2020)

He Rides

He Rides

When he gets lonely he rides,
all through town, 
up and down
the small town streets and neighborhoods.
He lives alone,
his wife is gone, 
the days are long, 
so he rides.
He returns home to rest a while.
The walls start closing in,
he knows nothing else to do, 
so he rides again


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