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Premium Member Olympian In Absentia

He said that in odd years he's fat,
He can't be Olympian in that.
In years that are not,
He can't find the spot,
Or else he'd have gold by the vat.

Unrequited Love :: the Go Vat

Loved him as I wanted to not because
he 'd love me back; knew well what love was.
Did he not know, disregard is painful?

Though 'twas true feelings, but he did ignore
me all time, he's carefree; thought he'd adore.
How to accept such behaviour, it's painful.

Love is unconditional, 'twas mirage;
woeful life was forced, I relied upon
but the way he treated, it was painful.

Wished to be true to feelings; though recall
intimate talks, can't believe anymore;
won't be able to bear more, it's painful.

Thought he'd honor vows, never marked his flaws;
I's fool, his attitudes I did ignore.
Realized unrequited love painful.
~X~X~X~

A Greased Eel In a Vat of Astroglide

Slipperier than a Greased Eel In a Vat of Astroglide
That Hillary’s sociopathic streak is a mile wide
In case you haven’t noticed, the fix is in
But her followers love her even if she’s guilty as sin
We all think she should be a woman of greater convictions 
Both moral and criminal, given her total lack of friction
She’s got a layer of Teflon thicker than Gotti
And to the Secret Service, a mouth full of potty
She looks crookeder than even a barrel of snakes will
Phonier than A William Jefferson Clinton three dollar bill

7/24/16
© By Author
For Contest: Create An Idiom
Sponsor: Jesse Day


A Smile Will Make Someone's Day -Pathya Vat-

It would not hurt 
once in a while 
make people smile 
might make their day.
 
Copyright © Cynthia Jones 
Dec.7/2005 

I believe in this. If you smile, you just might get that one person, to smile right back. :o)

Premium Member The Pathya Vat Poem Form - Pathya Vat

Camb'dian form 
Obscure and nice 
Four lines precise 
Dimeter each 

It's kind of neat 
Done light or dark 
You see them spark 
When you do it 

Fun and easy 
Every single bit 
Filled of wit 
Any time- anyway 

So roll your dice 
With this form play 
Have it your way 
Try it- have fun! 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2007 



October,19,2014

Pathya Vat

Take a pumpkin,
add giant wheels
crafted from steel.
Then add a door.

Find a princess,
but then make sure
she's home before
the clock strikes twelve!

_____________

For RIDE ON A PATHYA VAT contest
8/5/2014
CARRIAGE


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