Early Jae Poet Verse

Pathya Vat

Take a pumpkin,
add giant wheels
crafted from steel.
Then add a door.

Find a princess,
but then make sure
she's home before
the clock strikes twelve!

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For RIDE ON A PATHYA VAT contest
8/5/2014
CARRIAGE

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Casarah Nance August 11, 2014 at 6:30 PM Haha I love it! Well done! grats on your win

Debbie Guzzi August 11, 2014 at 2:59 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 11, 2014 at 5:51 AM Great unique take Ea rly,, congrats on awesome win!

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2014 at 5:01 AM an extraordinary take on the theme, john.. well phrased! thanks for supporting my contest and huge cheers on your splendid win.. huggs Early Jae August 11, 2014 at 4:43 PM Thanks, I really liked the theme and look forward to another contest from you!

Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:27 AM dropping back with my congratulations John:-) Hugs jan xxx Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 4:52 PM Thank you I was so delighted:-) Hugs jan xxx Early Jae August 11, 2014 at 4:45 PM Again thank you! Congrats on top place!!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 10, 2014 at 5:19 AM Very brilliant in so simple words, John. Congrats on the win Early Jae August 11, 2014 at 4:41 PM Thank you!

Jan Allison August 6, 2014 at 4:00 AM Superb! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Early Jae August 6, 2014 at 12:28 PM Well thank you so much!