Unpremeditated Poems | Examples


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Premium Member I saw God but now what

Indeed, I declare, I have seen God.
However, He emerged and vanished.
I was climbing up the hillock to visit the deity.
Noticed an aged-man with scraggy structure 
Sitting cross-legged on the verge
Stretched his dangling frail hand 
Seeking alms with slurred voice
I could read the pain behind his sunken eyes.
Instantly offered him what I was holding.
Indeed, I affirm, I saw God in him.
He emerged and vanished.
I climbed down as the purpose was fulfilled.
Thereafter, I went on many a time
Offering many to the gathering there.
Intended to envision Him again but in vain 
How could it happen earlier?
I deduced that my first impulse was out of spontaneity 
But not unpremeditated
I was amazed at this knowledge that beyond the mind.
However, until what is ingested is processed, I fear I may burn.

Premium Member ACTIONSTA pollock

ACTIONISTA pollock
no
  beginning
with
  no end
unpremeditated
continuous
 random
  expresion
of
the moment
vertica
to
the
horizontal
   happenings


as arrested
moments

  falling

notions

   raining
abstract

   visions

Premium Member Unpremeditated Manhattan

Their meeting, first time, was merry.
The flip from her lips, bit airy.
   Her drink could sink ships.
   She takes sip and quips,
“Would you like to eat my cherry?”


Premium Member Faces

FACES
compelling
 features
ageing
into
 formal components
 of
 continuous interest
an
unplanned
unpremeditated
sequence
 inventive
& revered
to
 capture the soul

 images
a
 testimony
to  mirror
the reflection
 setting
apart
 sidelong
 reactions
to
 correlate
the shifts
between
 frustrations
& irritations
 alongside
the
 learned
verbal
& emotional


NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

Tripping the Light Fantastic

"Tripping the Light Fantastic"



Dance?

She said,
romancing
the lost agenda

You’re so
left 
sold

(LadyLabyrinth / 2021)








“Hail to thee, blithe Spirit!
Bird thou never wert,
That from Heaven, or near it,
Pourest thy full heart
In profuse strains of unpremeditated art.”










sold
soled
souled

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