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Unpremeditated Manhattan

Their meeting, first time, was merry. The flip from her lips, bit airy. Her drink could sink ships. She takes sip and quips, “Would you like to eat my cherry?”

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Date: 2/27/2024 12:20:00 PM
Kim, it was obviously a Manhattan you were drinking and not an Old Fashioned. The former has a lot more spice and according to Google is brazen but sophisticated. Your limerick made me laugh and I haven't touched any alcohol. :) Cheers - Gary
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2024 1:17:00 PM
LOL…thanks, Gary :)
Date: 1/21/2024 6:51:00 PM
Good humor.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2024 7:22:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 1/18/2024 7:56:00 PM
No, you didn't.... Yes, you did... omg.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 9:44:00 PM
Only because, yes, I was the one who innocently said it then realized what I said…LOL! Been married to this man now for almost 44 years.
Date: 1/16/2024 12:43:00 PM
Ha! Good one Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2024 7:06:00 PM
Glad it made you laugh :) LOL
Date: 1/15/2024 4:07:00 PM
Whohoo, Kim. That one of the best, imop. Must be limerick season. HA! Stay creative.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2024 4:31:00 PM
Thanks, RJ!
Date: 1/15/2024 3:30:00 PM
OH NO.....not another "Fruit of the Loom" joke
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2024 4:31:00 PM
LOL

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