IN TWO MINDS
a bastion of
tradition
appealing
indominatable
stylistic shapeshifting
driven by impulse
an isolated trend
yet
erstwhile
antagonizing
scandalous&
disturbing
unconcered
by controversy
& inverted
upraised
gestures
touched
by catastrophe
the
peculiar
neurotic disrupted
wretched & dismissive
distinctive
the
celebrated
provocation
disembodied
with a
prediliction to
unconformity
a focused
individual
still infamous
for intervention
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
A deep ocean under the blue,
And one in my heart.
The tides upsurging furious,and waters so high.
Just like vivacious thoughts In my mind.
With the only unconformity........
That plethora would go calm sometimes,
Unlike my spirit that would introspect at all times.
Because the ripples had pioneered the seashore,
But my soul bewildered far from its destination.
Written May 16th, 2013
Featured poem of the week- on Oct 11th, 2015
A vessel contents unknown
all that unconformity speaks of
dramatic and real
never to be placed on a shelf
by any man’s hand dead or alive
Waiting on empty faith refrained
imagining crystalline brotherly love
untainted and shockingly pain free
Monsters they come
in velvety gift wrapped boxes
chipping away porcelain veneer
weakening bonds of molecular structure
levee breaks and inside turns out
A solitary heart with no legions at my side
raised arms against a fortress of spades
pledging my life in return splendor magnificent
As inhuman as a man's heart seems...
hidden inside is a tender side:
a beautiful side seldom seen by others;
and that fear of being sensitive
is a real hurdle for those men sworn in pride,
but manly qualities are judged by his deeds...
A woman's perception of the common man is that
he is lives in an unintentional masquerede,
to hide the sweetness he won't manifest;
and this unconformity won't let his beauty
be capturated by intense emotions of masculinity...
will he break the myth and be appreciated?
I have struggled with it indefinitely
and embraced this stereotype unsympathetically,
why are we supposed to be so uncaring and invulnerable,
and outgrow our own resistance and be so invincible;
have we realized that disharmony,
indignation and frustration are not truly noble?
As inhuman as a man's heart seems,
many sacrifice love for an unexplanable cause...
putting vanity before human compassion:
without guilt, regard and trepidation;
have we become so stubbornly persistent...
to lose all self-direction and prospective?
Here it is
A new picture of love
It is freedom with boundaries
It is boundaries without limitations
Endless irony bursting forth realization
An equevocal, obscure equation
A message too complex to decipher
Certainty is in the knowing
Something riveting and unexpected
Has come from a master
You and me
As the subject to frame
We determine direction
In the centre lines of confusion
Settled in by infinite desires
Burning and melting traditions
United to each other by virtue
Of defiance to world-set standards
Perhaps in divine vision
Of the One who led a universal path
Our cosmic reign
To meet in fruition
We come to this
Love furnace freedom
Beyond understanding
Nor people's mental girding
A picture we paint
In a blank canvass of lessons learned
Stroking flames of affection
Illuminating new design
On patterns of unconformity
Flowing silhouettes
Others call the abstract creation
We just don't know
But a new picture is worth the attention
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