Tin Foil Poems | Examples


Mr Tin Foil

Mr Tin Foil
He’s a tin foil hat type of guy 
Do you know of those? 
They wear tin foil hats 

To stop the authorities 
From reading their brain waves 
His report says he is a higher thinker 
Or some such turds and that imbeciles 

Think he’s insane due 
To their lack of understanding 
He’s a real fricking lunatic hahahaha
Categories: tin foil, people, rude, satire, sick,
Form: Prose Poetry

Premium MemberTin Foil Lizard

Shiny lizard climbing up my wall
attached with nail, without pain
stoic and unyielding
glowing so happily
excites me today
entertaining,
lizard shape
foiled
tin
Categories: tin foil, 7th grade, 8th grade,
Form: Nonet


Premium MemberTin Foil Hearts

On pensive planes of wraith-like existence,
Are stoic shadows feigning affection;
Crimson lips of withering consistence,
Have lost their craze for craving confection.

Tear-filling prisms tilling a rueing sphere,
Pathos prowling, pity's wild and roaming;
Reminisce wind-blown is tumbleweed drear,
Bathos like bramble bur clings in gloaming.

Tin foil hearts' echo sad droning down-beat,
Rose petal ballet two rust figurines;
Today's gray sleet does douse yesteryears' heat,
Apathy's ennui directing the scenes...

Love once aflare in fanfare marigold,
Lies now a wizened weed, dried and stone cold.


Susan Ashley
November 2, 2017
Categories: tin foil, life, lost love, sad
Form: Sonnet

Tin Foil Destiny


You are my favorite conspiracy
My curious heart wonders
what future secrets you have to tell
When I walk by, 
your friends all whisper:
Hush, hush ... here comes her baby!
Incubated thoughts nine months in the making,
infatuated womb of maybe on the swell
You had a shy delivery ... pregnant desires, no faking
It is real, this love you feel — 
every dream you had about me told you so
At a rendezvous designation,
delivered by a scented missive,
Fate was confirmed by the distant ringing of a church bell
We sat together holding hands,
with our backs against the wishing well
Intense ruminating eyes 
exchanged conspiracies of the heart
You removed my tin foil hat of shiny yearning,
and told me that 
hiding in plain view was the perfect disguise
When it comes to revealing whom you’re in love with,
don’t be afraid, you said:
Come embrace your tin foil destiny
Sitting at the back of my mind, on the top shelf,
just waiting ... waiting
for the unveiling 
of my illuminated aluminum destiny
Discovery of your liquid elixir of love
is the best heartsick medicine remedy
A perfect prescription 
for loneliness plots getting tin foiled
Categories: tin foil, destiny, emotions, fate, love,
Form: Free verse

Tin Foil Promises

Sweet anticipation, your heart 
in my hand,
Robed in shiny bits of blue,
Creamy milk and ignorance,
Promises, poetic and new. 
Heavenly cocoa whispers,
Enigma wrapped in a mystery.
Dreams and hopes and 
innocence,
To taste and share and see.
A smile, a kiss...heartfelt 
embrace,
Moments meant to last.
Yet sometimes a moment is 
nothing more,
Once it's gone and passed.
Lies, deceit and bittersweet,
One thing leads to ten.
What once was love and 
chocolate, 
That never should have been.
All the prose and sentiment,
Belief in love that's loyal,
Torn, tattered, crumpled up,
Like that little piece of blue tin 
foil.
Long forgiven but never 
forgotten,
Long since trashed and gone.
The love and chocolate, 
memories,
Of promises gone wrong.
Categories: tin foil, betrayal
Form: ABC


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