Patsy was tattered and torn
Her clothes were all dirty and worn
She was a mess
In her threadless dress
People looked at her in scorn
I see a kite flies
Easy, threadless in the skies,
Down, down to its doom.
One, threaded, higher does rise,
Freedom’s not just too much room.
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Tanka |16.01.2023| freedom
Our
candlelight show,
entwining fingers
bolder now
fragrances mingle
in threadless embrace,
shadow puppets.
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Placement: 1st;(September 2012)
Contest:Septolet the Puppet
Sponsor:Nette Onclaud
By:kash poet
Date:22nd September 2012
SEPTOLET: it consists of 7 lines with a total of 14 words ... the line break comes between the 4th and 5th lines though both parts deal with the same thought to create a unified effect…
to make it interesting, you must use one fabric and one flavor in your piece.
I just don't know
If this is how the even; flows:
The wind is good tonight, but i'm tired of the chill( fresh; an interesting definition that wouldn't be helpful if added to that sentences) like a handless slap:( ..cause that was better..)a threadless cloth that covers.
... Don't you tire of the watch?
There's no ticking in this clock,
but the hands just keeps caressing
for they wonder why eyes stay keen;
strength in gaze..mouth stays clean.
Sometimes I carry too much; I have the words but they stay stuck and then I wait for to long and not because the thought was gone. Rings like a dong. Carried by a cliche acoustic song( Still is strong ).
I'll just be loud
Carry my voice a thousand miles
A w a y f r o m y o u
Still have no clue
Still have no clue
A thousand miles away from you
Can't you see, the sky is o so blue
Take it as you always do.
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