Kash Poet Poet Verse

Shadow Puppets

Our
candlelight show,
entwining fingers
bolder now

fragrances mingle
in threadless embrace,
shadow puppets.


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Placement: 1st;(September 2012)

Contest:Septolet the Puppet

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

By:kash poet

Date:22nd September 2012

SEPTOLET: it consists of 7 lines with a total of 14 words ... the line break comes between the 4th and 5th lines though  both parts deal with the same thought to create a unified effect…

to make it interesting, you must use one fabric and one flavor in your piece.

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Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2012 at 1:05 PM Just stopping to say HI. (well, you WERE first place in community builders for a split second anyway. haha)

Apoorva Patrikar September 29, 2012 at 1:38 AM nice lines! congratulations on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 12:45 AM Kash,, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 28, 2012 at 8:00 AM Big conrats Kash xx

Connie Marcum Wong September 28, 2012 at 5:39 AM I love your entry Kash. So happy you placed number One! Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 28, 2012 at 5:21 AM Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson September 27, 2012 at 5:12 PM Congratulations on your entry and win. I rremember doing that in Kerosene lamplight. Great shadow light. Love, Joyce

Barbara Gorelick September 27, 2012 at 5:01 PM Im so proud of you..such a big win and this is my favorite of the bunch...congrats. BG

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 4:50 PM Hurrah for you. It was one of my very favorites and a very well deserved win!!

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2012 at 1:17 PM Congrad's on your most romantic win Light & Love

Modupe Sefunmi September 27, 2012 at 7:31 AM Lovely write Kash! Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 26, 2012 at 9:50 PM CONGRATS KASH ON ANOTHER SWEET VICTORY AND FIRST PLACE SPOT LUV ..

Joann Grisetti September 26, 2012 at 7:01 PM Congratulations on a remarkable poem for this contest.

Gwendolen Song September 26, 2012 at 4:18 PM Ta Dah!! The winner is-----YOU!!! Great one, Kash....

Carrie Richards September 26, 2012 at 2:53 PM Hooray for you Kash!!! Loved this romantic take on Nette's contest! Congratulations, and thanks always for your input! I depend on your 2nd pair of eyes! :)

Gwendolen Song September 25, 2012 at 7:43 PM You've said everything except that you were both lying on satin sheets...this is sexy!! Great entry for Nette! :) gwendolen

Len Gasun September 25, 2012 at 1:05 AM This is an excellent entry! I love this one. I remember when I was a child, I make many shadow puppets just using my fingers. Good luck and best wishes always, Kash!!! hugs:) Leonora

Sara Kendrick September 24, 2012 at 1:11 PM This one is a winner for sure..I can just see those finger puppets...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Harry Horsman September 24, 2012 at 8:45 AM so poetic, such elegance

Nette Onclaud September 23, 2012 at 2:20 PM i'm here, kashi... just been busy!,,:) huggs and come over!

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2012 at 1:35 PM just dropping by to say HI.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 23, 2012 at 8:25 AM astounding poetry Kash with beauty of created images of shadow puppets.. winning wishes for Nette .. this is an exciting picture luv ..

Ravi Sathasivam September 23, 2012 at 2:10 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed.tfs

Richard Palmer September 22, 2012 at 6:38 PM good luck Kash

Joann Grisetti September 22, 2012 at 6:07 PM I have been enjoying your poems, and this septolet is great.

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