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Premium Member Longing In Covert Crypt


The meadow of my mind 
dried desolate as the desert dune.
The mist of concealed passion 
suspended with mystique opacity 
in the sunk halcyon horizon, 
waited for the southern wind 
to surreptitiously blow 
from the fervent sparkling sky 
with your sequined charisma,
swathing the shades of my blue.

In the titular template of loneliness,
the secret motif of my longing
designed the lattice of desire, 
carved the furtive image of my heart,
the quivering willow in the wilderness.

The dormant dreams blazed in inferno;
I breathed the ashen memory smoke
afloat stealthily in the sky of vacuity.
The design of desolation intertwined  
the splinters of my desire icons,
flew on the trajectory of covert longing 
to the clandestine corral of anonymity,      
lay within the poignant crypt 
as the skeletons in the closet.

The Call of the Sea

The Call of the Sea

The ship breathes lightly,
pushing with a sway, 
away from the dock
to glide towards the call 
of the seas and a watery ease.

The ship slips across a
shimmering polished body,
waiting to be clutched by 
wind, wave and welcome
folding into a blue, muscular rhythm
surging, urging towards distant lands, distant sands.

The sea patterns and pulses,
whispering secrets from its depths,
“What you can’t see is what you don’t know!”
Then for hours, the ship is gritted with determination
shuddering, stretching, straining its low bow
in search of a hidden horizon
but, instead, uncovering a punch of a storm.

In time, night follows surreptitiously
in the vessel’s wandering wake
painting a thin, watery darkness
while the storm’s aggressive beauty…. drifts,
leaving lightning behind to scratch the heavens;
offering a brief pathway of light.
The ship, with a sense of swagger,
a lilt of shashay….rhythms onwards.

Ian Souter

Premium Member world of his making

My eight-year-old son spent the day in his kingdom
with his stone creature
luring boys and superheroes into doing their bidding

His requests were simple
the stone creature sat silent and surreptitiously stealthy
I looked in on him a few times

He was deep in the throes of his realm
loving his action figures
building a world of his making

I was inspired by his imaginative prowess
picked up a canvas and began to draw
working toward my own fantastical realm


Premium Member Paradigm Of Contrast


For the contrived inducement 
of the fixated being, 
an aligned identity personified,
changes in self-devised palette 
of metamorphosed color mélange,
while the conjured chameleon, 
slyly cocooned,
paints surreptitiously 
shape-shifted deception portrait.

In ostensible enactment 
of life’s incredible drama, 
performance perfected in one-act play 
with obsessed passion parodied,
gilds the corollary crafted by alchemy,
an axiomatic designed drive
induces the wily shift 
from one actor to another.

Out of the limelight, 
the covert colors fade  
on virtually made-up visage,
the pallid original face 
morphs mystically into 
veracity mirror of actuality, 
reflects the real identity depiction, 
painted in primal persona hues 
of distinctive disposition, 
epitomized once.

The spasm of pragmatic perception 
splits the mirror, 
shards of shattered pretence
willfully abandoned as discarded debris. 

Transformation creates the eluding entity, 
an alien in its own reinvented realm,
completes the illusory pattern,
designed by the paradigm of contrast.

Premium Member A Remark On A Truism

“We have the politicians we deserve.”
What kind of “we” I’m synched with on brainwaves?
How many “we” are surreptitiously reserved 
For the reunion, in whose family grave?
It’s plain to see what politicians are about
They’re ubiquitous like weather, that brings weeds
To every garden, and they can’t be weeded out
But it’s not good to blame me for their deeds
So I don’t need my politicians and their mob
But surely they deserve people like me
And that’s the awful part of their job
They know it, and demand a larger fee..

Premium Member surreptitiously salacious

.
                               secretly 
                           surrender'in
                           scantly shod (sylph's suggestive)
                        sun screen'd she 

                        sweat soak'd she
                              screech'd
                                sizzling
                                soundz

                              synopsis'n
                         such sweet seks
                            surely slights
                                 surreal

                                     so
                                   stoic

                                       ")


A Masterpiece For The Summit

How far gone is my soul and mind,
That coming back seems impossible?
My hands ache to be steered by your prompt,
Yet hours of blankness blunt my will.

But still I can etch out classics—
My pen lies close, surreptitiously listening,
To gather in ink the wisdom you proffer,
For those fleeting moments of madness.

The top ten will never be my goal,
But that one crown that ends the race;
For this is no sprint that halts at a hundred—
A trophy beside my poem is all I crave.

Yet the nearest mile I first must conquer,
Before the next, and miles beyond.
Though fingers ache as if racing from fear,
No shadow of doubt shall make me yield.

Oh mine! Oh mine! I see it now—
A wonder folded deep in words.
I’ve penned a masterpiece for the summit;
No judge can deny its rightful place.

If none are near to ring my bell,
I’ll strike it loud with my own voice;
For I am no gentleman in this contest—
But a rival running the race to win.

Premium Member Peace And Harmony Sequel


One of my first poems
resurfaces in my mind
as I recall my
beginnings as a Poet
I reminisce about
peaceful times when
Peace and Harmony
were plentiful, bountiful
It's amazing how things
can filter through your thoughts
causing emotions
that surreptitiously cement
your current actions
It is all one
big joy ride
that convalesces through
existential surroundings
bound by convictions
that put you in a place
that is calm, serene

Premium Member Thought of the day

all is well, all is well
we are in ineffable peace
in tranquil, time stretched stillness 
then an ego ripple surreptitiously arises
scarring the very fabric of our soul
watch all thoughts oh hermit
nipping them in the bud

Premium Member Interpolation


View things extraneously
Watch materialistic
objects vanish

We're all just
gliding through
contemporaneous philanderings

While the judgmental eyes
are examining meticulously
making preposterous

assumptions that have
no validity factually
even culminating forcefully

opening doors
to various realms
that are beyond

the ordinary happenings
you contemplate surreptitiously
trying not to give

any clues to what
you're actually thinking
while a disposition awaits

Premium Member neighborly vernal packtage

.
                 ‘Twuz uh hot
                      Spring
              Mine door’s gong
                     Rapped
           ‘twuz the welcomed
                        the 
                   pretty box
      the surreptitiously delivered
                 All rapped up
                In my favorite
                     Colour
                      ‘glint’
              
                    Such the 
                 turgid sweet
                    package 
                  
          From mine front stoop
                       into
           mine grateful room’s
                    Imagine

                 vernal fever
                      on uh
                    (shhhh)
                  sun burst'n
                     breezy
                      morn


*packtage spelled correctly
         artistic license 
                 ;)

Premium Member Seeking Safety from Sex-Sells Socials

Salacious, sultry
Simplistic signs of
Seedy sensory
Semi sentimental sales on
Socials
Surreptitiously
Slinking ..
Slowly
Sliding into your 
Sphere and
Psyche.
Psychologically
Seducing
Some senses so
Suspiciously 
Satisfying 

So,
Surrender self;
Shield for safety,
Stand strong
Secure salient sentience 
Successfully 
Set sights solidly -
So soul secures solidarity
In sacred sanctuary of
Shalom

Somewhere,
Sandy sunsets certainly save,
Silky spider's web sparkles in sunshine,
Soft sensory surroundings subdue
Significant silent scenery in
Summery satisfaction.
Soporific seaside sounds 
Singing in sympathy 
Solitary safe sanctuary of seduction
Saving soul's sanity.
Selah.

Slowly, so slowly..
Spirituality of the natural
Nestles into the nape of
Normality 
Now knowing
Nature's notably neutralising
Nurturing
Nourishment nectar of
Never-ending 
Nirvana

Premium Member Ego

ego identity long since vaporised 
at times yet surreptitiously resurrects
it’s now like a dusty, discarded book
lying somewhere on our bookshelf

it served its purpose in our early years
but then acquired a mind of its own
soon after tail began wagging the dog
so we plucked it out to sing soul’s song

we now roam the earth bubbling with mirth
this is taken as an orientation unbecoming 
trauma bonding with darkness most fear light
so we dwell in the void, vibrant in our aloneness

Premium Member Discombobulation


Publicly 
advertising 
he doesn't tickle
her fancy.
If that's no lie,
then why 
seek him out 
surreptitiously? 
Her terms of endearment 
flow like honey off her lips,
but what are they worth?
Does she mean anything she says?
Profound confusion 
blowing like smoke 
in his mind 
expands into 
a mushroom cloud.
He endlessly wonders
if her attraction is true.
Her mixed messages 
traps him 
hook line and sinker 
in chin-stroking discombobulation.
She relishes dangling 
her feminine wiles 
to him like a carrot.
When he comes close 
to nibble at her charms,
she p  u  l  l  s away.
How cruel?
She's a struck match 
that goes out in the frigid cold.
He can't seem to make 
heads or tails 
of her words and deeds.
What sort of game 
is she playing? 
It's perplexing.

Don't Start the Revolution Without Me

Start your revolution secretly,
don't tell the priest,
he's a blabber-mouthed gutter-skite.

Don't tell the cat,
for at might he whispers to Alexa,
and she listens always
to the political tenor of your snoring.

Your body must be mechanically sound,
and on speaking terms
with every loose nut in society.

Trust the crazies, they have eyes everywhere.
The banks need you to deposit blood,
as your plasma will be useful
to power your electric doppelganger -
then they can go after your soul

Revolutions need money, mainly for dope and drinks.
No great movement can long survive,
on stale guacamole pilfered from city dumpsters.

Hail to the Chefs at Wendys
who surreptitiously offer cold fries,
to the snooping Feds.

Long live the freedom to carp and cavil,
never surrender your constitutional right
to watch, the 'My Pillow' Man,
revolutionaries need soft pillows,
to dream upon.

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