fantastical
raptures
in
enriched
feelings
satisfaction
suggested
by
pleasing
effects
genuine
romance
experienced
foretaste
of
the
anticipated
expectations
of
shapes
delineated
&
reflections
recalled
With
my eyes
I trace the
icy slice of
a glistening lake
which mirrors autumn’s sky.
Its glacial blue enchants me.
I almost taste the bracing breeze
rustling trees’ surviving vivid leaves.
Cool blue sky will soon succumb to dusk.
Mauve merges with coral blossoms.
I wait . . . watching and breathing
in sublimity as
sapphire captures sky.
On its canvas
heaven’s stars
soon will
dance.
SUBLIMITY
fantasy
explored
sentimrnt
romanrtised
pleasing
feeings
embidied
in
a
winding
sparklinh
future
a foretaste
of
convention
splashed
in
textual
theatre
complexity
confounded
in a
stunning
respose
Moment of sublimity
when I penetrate your being
and I dlve into your essence
SUBLIMITY
eerie
empty
&the bizarre
sublime
resemblance
now apparent
the
idiosyncratic
& experimental
& intense
expressiveness
anticipating
the hidden
poetic
possible
dwarfed
in the
abyss
a place
of mystery
swallowed
by an
oblivious
translates
the pleasures
of the joyous
surrounding
the sublime
so full
of
meaning
a
memento mori
of
stilled
life
a missing
link
hints at
reality
layered
in
our
yesterdays
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Simple things can be sublime.
Even the garbage may host a flower
in a fugacious moment!
Bird of Paradise,
petals blue-orange,
its vibrant colours
symbolize happiness,
watch the flower grow
in sublimity ~
colours of rainbow
sunset orange glow
depth of azure ocean
bract a crooning bird
paradise sublime
on earth a flower rare
March 16, 2021
B-egin
E-njoying
T-he
S-cribe's
Y-early
R-egards
O-f
S-uperb
S-ublimity
Topic: Birthday of Betsy Ross (September 23)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
V-ery
A-wesome
N-atal
G-reeting
I-s
N-icely
E-mployed
L-etting
I-tself
S-imply
I-mplement
C-elebration
A-s
S-cribe
O-f
L-ovely
E-xpression's
N-otable
S-weetness
T-imely
E-ndorses
R-ighteous
T-heme's
E-xcellent
S-ublimity
I-n
N-ame's
G-reatness
Topic: Birthday of Vanginelisica Solenstertesing (October 15)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
D-elight
I-s
A-pplied
N-icely
A-dvancing
L-ine
O-f
N-atal
G-reeting's
O-verflowing
S-ublimity
Topic: Birthday of Diana Longos (October 18)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
P-leasant
A-tmosphere
T-imely
R-eappears
I-n
C-ool
I-mage
A-nd
S-ublimity
U-nderneath
A-s
R-ain
E-vades
Z-enith
Topic: Birthday of Patricia S. Suarez (September 17)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
E-arly
R-ay
I-n
N-ewness
G-lows
E-agerly
O-bliterating
R-ainy
G-ray
I-mage
A-s
N-atural
N-iceness
E-xpresses
S-ublimity
O-f
R-adiance
I-n
A-nother
N-ext
O-pportunity
Topic: Birthday of Erin Georgianne Soriano (September 26)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
R-egards
E-mploy
Y-early
N-ote
A-bout
L-iterary
D-edication's
S-ublimity
A-s
B-irthday
R-ightfully
I-mplements
G-leeful
O-ccasion
Topic: Birthday of Reynalds C. Abrigo (February 19)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
J-oyful
O-ccasion's
N-atal
A-crostic
L-ets
E-xcellent
N-ame
E-mploy
S-ublimity
I-n
E-xcellent
R-egards
R-elieving
A-nguish
Topic: Birthday of Jonalene
R. Sierra (December 21)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
S-cribe
H-as
I-mplemented
E-normous
L-ove
A-s
C-elebrant
A-pplies
D-evotion
E-njoying
M-essage
A-bout
S-ublimity
Topic: Birthday of Shiela E. Cademas (December 20)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
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