Sublimity a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation

SUBLIMITY
fantasy
 explored
sentimrnt
  romanrtised

pleasing
  feeings
embidied
in
a
winding
 sparklinh
future
a foretaste
of
convention
  splashed
in
textual
theatre

complexity
  confounded
in a
stunning
respose

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