Ravelling Poems | Examples


List of Member Poems

Screaming Bards of Mu Mu Land

life it seems
is not without its irony
for the screaming bards 
of Mu Mu Land

.. on lounging chairs
.. on deep-piled rugs
.. just laying round
.. reciting verse

.. my bards were still
.. and known to all
.. in whispered words
.. as mild as mauve 

and when they showed me to the door
I could sense within 
creativeness 
the un-ravelling of their pain

A Sea of Emotion

glowing starlight skies 
kissed  moonlit eyes
riding silver showers
in sinking  sea tides

waves ravelling in rhyme
across miles waters tide
voice, then just into mime
within you tangled beside

oceanic salty waves rise
rolling vibrations quelled
ebony glow burns naked
aquamarine water swell

Train To White City

Slouching on the evening train
Ravelling through old anxieties,
It better than eye contact with robots
Haplessly Shuffling on and off 
The deepest and fondest memories appear
Through the thorny ripples of mind
Speeding down memory lane
First memory, first bike, first bruise
First Day of school, no front teeth
Fast forward to first date, 
Sloppiness of that first awkward kiss
First love pangs of distress
Until at last your realize
You passed your flaming stop.


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