Rattling(A) Poems | Examples


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Premium Member Child Of Hope

His soles grate from cuts on bare feet,
eyes growing hazy, rattling a waif’s hum
and he freezes, quivers as night enfolds
like pointed ice tearing a heart in scraps .

A ruptured cry mirrors a dusky face,
while weary thoughts keep the stars awake
praying for grace to tide the lonely breeze,
where out there, a street child drifts on mud
to beg, plead for a morsel of tomorrow.

Can’t he be a kid just running along the grass
in a gracious place tucked in a home,
Where laughter glows...
A childhood scene that’s not a plague?

But  then...dreams are gauze-thin, 
needing hope’s reprieve .

Premium Member It's Coming

It’s coming
A Nor’easter
they have held their finger up
compared the spaghetti plots
interviewed a guy with arthritis
unfurled the flags
sounded the alarm

and we wait
listening to the buoy bells
buying batteries and snacks
moving back from an unseen tide
knowing it will come
bending trees
scattering empty trash barrels
rattling a balky shed door
tearing at the edges of the bay

we know
it’s coming
A Nor’easter
And we wait!


John G. Lawless
©10/25/2021

Premium Member Snakes In Rural Pennsylvania

SNAKES IN RURAL PENNSYLVANIA

The snakes in his head 
were timber rattlers, easily
agitated, disinclined to fight,
their rattling a warning to all
before slipping away silently from 
conflict or harm
Unfortunately for the fortunate son
his bride to be was a young copperhead,
golden brown and beautiful on the
dark forest floor among the stones and
wet soil of a Blue Mountain summer, 
and unlike the rattler she was silent
and aggressive, looking for a fight!


Premium Member Trees I Have Known

I loved those trees, 
limbs draped in plump wild grapes, 
bursting with flavor on my tongue, 
while juice stained my fingers.
	
Tall cottonwoods shadowed 
the creek where we splashed—Sis,
brother, and I—and a giant sycamore 
shaded Granddad's spring. We slaked
our thirst from the granite dipper 
hung on a nail he'd hammered
into its trunk at kid level.

We watched water belch like corn, 
rattling a popper lid, and ripple 
over rocks in the streambed, 
where minnows and crawfish 
hid from prying fingers.

Hawk-eyed, we scouted 
gnarled branches in the orchard 
for ripening fruit, luscious and tangy, 
spurting juice to drip off elbows.

Hazelnut bushes flourished
by the back fence; black walnut trees 
shaded Grandmother's back porch. 
Our uncles helped burst crack-jaw shells 
with hand-held rocks on the stone slabs 
stretching toward the gate.

I do not envy the children 
whose play-field offers brick and concrete,
severe and naked, whose only fruit
blows down alleys and into streets, 
as the refuse of city dwelling.

My Next Door Neighbor Flower Enthusiast

Sometimes my heart may seem to soften







And I am glad Jill is not away too often







Also sure like Gene my new neighbor







A peaceful sort never rattling a sabre.















Not sophisticated or prefers to go strutting







And never heard of him ever head-butting







A perfect pleasure having him next door







Brought me ice cream from a local store.















One more notch on belt started to buckle







When he said I sure like your honeysuckle







And before my door I had started shutting







He asked me if he could have a cutting.















James Thomas Horn







Retired Veteran







PS. Humor category of course.

Witching Hour

I dress silently
as if to leave by night
only to sit at the kitchen table
my mother's hands my own
rattling a cigarette between my fingers.
You wake to find me smoking
in the damp heat of the night,
my black hair spread across my shoulders.
You gather me in your arms
like a child that needs soothing
and carry me back to bed.
The cool of the sheets
is an answer for a time.


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