Onward Motion Poems | Examples


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Into the Dark

Silently; I admire the last summer twilight. 
From below the horizon light’s glow prevails. 
blissful: the feeling of suspension between day and night 

There's an eerie pause in onward motion as time stands still. 
A flicker of universal stretching of light in full view.
Too soon the sky is replaced with a terrifying hill.

My mind crumbles as dark falls all around. 
Shadows descend bringing a crisp, quiet chill. 
Weighted down by my silence,  I'm upward journey bound. 

In a panic I look around but all I see is wall. 
Not yet knowing the climb begins with a downward spiral. 
Lonely; I embark on my inward fall.

Assistance

ASSISTANCE

Lay beneath this white gift
Wished upon you with grace, from me
I insist

Help me
Help you uncover persistence, and
Resist consistency problems
Solving them with onward motion
Evolving

Carved deep down and dark
Immaculate canvas of our mother earth
Inserted hope in which I spark
A light
Your light

Lift my wings, as a sudden impact of energy sinks in
Shrinking your retina optics within
At the same time, widening the vast horizons of infinite thought
Caught now is the opposite of dim

Flocks of ambition fly high
Foreseeing the truth
There, soaring bold
Holding the night sky
Tightly, sinking brightly
Drowning from unfolded grips of tomorrow

The Maelstrom

Soaring ahead
Through time and space
I’m in over my head 
At an unsteady pace

Lost in fear 
From an onward motion
Results in a tear
Due to much emotion

Trapt in a daze
Everything swirling
It’s all a haze
Spinning, whirling

I wish to end 
This crazy ride
The rules bend
With broken pride

The feelings gone
They float away
It’s been so long 
Since I’ve lived for today


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