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Into the Dark

Silently; I admire the last summer twilight. From below the horizon light’s glow prevails. blissful: the feeling of suspension between day and night There's an eerie pause in onward motion as time stands still. A flicker of universal stretching of light in full view. Too soon the sky is replaced with a terrifying hill. My mind crumbles as dark falls all around. Shadows descend bringing a crisp, quiet chill. Weighted down by my silence, I'm upward journey bound. In a panic I look around but all I see is wall. Not yet knowing the climb begins with a downward spiral. Lonely; I embark on my inward fall.

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Date: 1/2/2018 1:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Well done, Samantha.
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Date: 12/29/2017 2:10:00 PM
Great fist post Samantha.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 12/28/2017 9:53:00 PM
Hi, Samantha, My name is Gershon Wolf. I'm new to Poetry Soup, just having posted my first poems today. Two comments about your poem: First, the narrative and the imagery worked for me. I felt both the hope and the terror. Second, I like how you captured the universal theme of falling before rising. ---gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/28/2017 9:54:00 PM

Book: Shattered Sighs