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348 My Adoration to Archangel Gabriel

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My Adoration to Archangel Gabriel



Oh Archangel Gabriel, receive my adoration!

Thou who are heralded as “Harbinger of Divine Revelation”

Reveal unto me the secret of eternal salvation

Cleanse me with God's white ray of purity

Be my cleansing courier when my sins are covering me

With your truthful tidings, raise me up from the grave

From the Ascension Temple of Luxor in Egypt, deliver your hoping slave!



-03/04/2015

(Dumarao)

*My Angels Collection

Vagabond 1260

Green and yellow, 
Lime of sunrise before, 
Orange in front, 
Rhymes on the board, 
Queen of Saba goes to North, 
Cross with rainbow, 
From Bethlehem to Luxor, 
It signifies no slay, no rob, 
Shoot the sheriff of sorrow, 
Rightness of heart not wrong, 
Notes are colors, 
My song and psalm, 
The road of hope, 
God of love above, 
I don't stop like arrow, 
The sword one on one, 
Icon of one vagabond, 
The world around, 
Stopping the pale albatross, this storm, 
Like a contractor the Patriot, 
But precise, Ivanhoe, more,
Gone and not gone,
Noe with the Dove.

Shifting Gears

Daffodils were bobbing,
I never thought to ask why?
January was the coldest -
dreams don't care
and the yellow trumpets
were almost speaking
and I almost listening.

However, sex got through
this bucolic view,
the daffs turned
into a belly dancer
I once admired in Luxor.

Now I am being scolded
by a demi-god with goat horns
on his curly head. It's not happy
with my expansive outlook.

I need a fifth gear in a dream car,
a vehicle roomy enough
for both a bed of daffodils
and a rather plumb Egyptian lady.

The goat guy can take a hike.


Premium Member A Cautionary Tale

Great is the battle, small the victory
  when all that is won is lost to mankind -
in this war of worlds its great casualty 
  is the fallen consciousness in our mind.
From spear tip and arrowhead to smart bomb
  or Ptolemy to Hubble looking glass,
Luxor hieroglyphs to CD Rom -
  from the Bronze to Silicon Age we pass.
Primeval footprint, genetic blueprint,
  sandstone castles under canyons of steel -
gone are the Caesars and Pharaohs extinct
  and there’s a cautionary tale so real.
Civilisations that with hubris act
fall a ruin, a remnant, an artifact.


          Written: August 2004

Long Night

He turned off the running water,
soaped his face not glancing at the mirror,
a long night ahead.

He had four shadows
on the four walls of this rental,
not a good sign.

When later he turned the bedside light on,
the glowing silhouette of his head on the pillow
burgeoned, swelling upwards until
it pancaked on the ceiling above.

Still groggy after the hashish
still psychoactive,
he got dressed.

Out walking the dark Luxor streets
he found a coffee shop still open.
The thick sweet brew was served to him,
a lime green dwarf
sporting a banana yellow fez.

Never again he thought,
patting his pockets hoping to find
some curative cancer sticks.

Too Much Sun In Luxor

Staring wide out from the past;
Never seen to blink.
Superior; nonchalent.
As kings and as gods.

Trace, as on a wall of air
Speech; decipherable.
As fades, fades, in front of each
Awe which silent nods.

"All of this rubbing of Time
As fierce these sands blow
Is, in defacing, blunt-clawed!
Bears Nile's hexopods".


The Sun Kings

A lone Nile felucca threads a path through a sorrel haze.
Morning tea outside the Winter Palace.
A Turkish cigarette mulling my wine.
The waiter is Nubian. He whistles a Cairo melody
as he sweeps the steps.

Luxor,
always one step from the desert.
Sand creeps over boulevards in serpentine waves.
Temples and hotels caught by an embalming dust; cinders
that must be swept daily under wilting shadows.

Soon Ra will walk out of the dawn.
I will barter with his face, haggle for a seared moment
of permanence.

For now, by the river, I sip tea, watch the light kindle
a far necropolis – a valley where kings gouged blood-lines
into the tombs for the sun.

Premium Member No Rosetta Stone

the nile denial 
    look sir have we found luxor 
           seti who said he

Open poetry 1 poetry contest 
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01/22/21

The Sun Kings

A lone Nile felucca threads a path through a sorrel haze.
Morning tea outside the Winter Palace.
A Turkish cigarette mulling my wine.
The waiter is Nubian. He whistles a Cairo melody
as he sweeps the steps. 

Luxor,
always one step from the desert.
Sand creeps over boulevards in serpentine waves.
Temples and hotels caught by an embalming dust; cinders
that must be swept daily under wilting shadows.

Soon Ra will walk out of the dawn.
I will barter with his face, haggle for a seared moment
of permanence.

For now, by the river, I sip tea, watch the light kindle
a far necropolis – a valley where kings gouged blood-lines
into the tombs for the sun.

Felucca Dreams

drifting
drifting off
to sleep 

going down
the Nile
once

when now
it seems
i was

a child and
childishly
these

dreams
were
real

never making it
to Luxor at least
by boat because

a wall of wonderment
was approaching
from the north

and as so suggested
docking and battening
down the hatches

before going below
i looked up to see
the only sandstorm

i've ever seen
but it blasted
my mind into

a glass
memory

Premium Member Egypt

Green scene that caught and took me clean away, 
captivated on the sights as the train 
excels, on our progress in the same day,
a rare place I will never know and gain. 

The Nile amongst the fields and the beauty
of the palm trees, and brown sandy places,
camels, tall pyramids so much to see 
as we pass the sites and sun kissed faces. 

Travel between Suez, Luxor, Aswan,
Alexandria, Port Said, and Cairo. 
Breathtaking, you never have time to yawn
knowing it will be a fabulous show.

Traveling through Egypt's grace in leisure, 
a lulling train rides in comfort pleasure.


9/29/2017

I Grew Up In a One Roomed Shack

I grew up in a one roomed shack
a king size Coca-Cola space
crammed like Marlboro cigars in a pack
a place I ran to for defense
my home which some see as a plight
where my family had to find the right way
it was my bedroom at night
my mother's pantry by day
a lounge where my dad like a doc upon a cadaver dissected
The Star while his kids goggled at Luxor television
I grew up in a shack protected
by corrugated irons walls of a mansion

Egypt

Luxor, oh Kharmack
Temples to Amon, Amon Ra
Pharaohs in sacred reverence
For both gods lifted
 
Along the majestic Nile
Through Upper Egypt
What an elite ... to stand quiet
There, on the Kings valley
At Tuntakamon progeny´s way
The Palace of Hatshepsut
In the Valley of the Queens
 
Majestic Horus and by Felucca
The Mausoleum of Agha Khan
Obelisk, still unfinished
And the pristine temple Philae
From Edfu to Aswan ...
 
The High Dam to retain
The nonalignment of Lake Nasser waters
The graffiti art, portraying the long story
Of the lives of all the Pharaohs
And the temples of Sobek, Horus and Khnum
In Kom Ombo
Fascinate the eyes of anyone

Egypt!

I know I haven’t been there yet,
It’s the one thing that I do regret;

There’s no place I would rather go
Such history from so long ago

Someday I will make that trip,
Maybe by plane, maybe by ship;

To see the Pyramids and the Sphinx,
Abu Simbel and the “missing link’s”;

To visit Luxor and Valley of the Kings,
Egypt is filled with so many things;

From Giza to Karnak and Abusir,
To Saqqara and the Oasis of Ahm Shere;

I can’t wait to see them all up close,
Of Egypt I need a healthy dose;

I’m saving up to travel there,
Readying my mind - so much to prepare;

So many places in Egypt to see,
The only thing missing there is me;

~10th Place in the "African's Attitude" Contest by Adeleke Adeite~

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