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I Grew Up In a One Roomed Shack

I grew up in a one roomed shack a king size Coca-Cola space crammed like Marlboro cigars in a pack a place I ran to for defense my home which some see as a plight where my family had to find the right way it was my bedroom at night my mother's pantry by day a lounge where my dad like a doc upon a cadaver dissected The Star while his kids goggled at Luxor television I grew up in a shack protected by corrugated irons walls of a mansion

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Date: 5/4/2017 9:46:00 PM
Hi Itumeleng: I am in awe in the manner you conveyed poverty a clever but poignantly way. My compliments!
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 5/14/2017 9:51:00 AM
Thanks bro for the compliment and that poem reminds me of my childhood.

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