Lostness Poems | Examples


Premium MemberFollow The Setting Sun


I had lost my way and felt all alone.
On a delivery mission near the end of my route,
some 25 to 30 miles from the shop, but it felt farther.
Every part of my being was being tossed about.
No phone, GPS, or internet; nor did I have a map.
I was lost, and there wasn't a soul in sight.
I parked and sat; thought and worried for a spell.
The 'feel of lostness' was saturating my soul.
I knew that my destination was West, but I had
lost my bearings and did not know what to do.
It was approaching late afternoon, and the sun
came to mind. So, I looked toward the fiery star
and followed the setting sun until I was reassured
that I was headed home. I had found my way.
Categories: lostness, lost,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Nine Pins

Life throws a curve
It's overdue 

A thumb is clearly
Under screw

The wall so cold
Against my back

Lightening strike
Now charred and black

"Nine lives all spent"
Purrs leaping cat

Nowhere left
To hang my hat

A parachute
With twisted lines

An absent ear
For bell that chimes 

Cruel Critique
When poem rhymes

Once friendly chat
Now voiceless mimes

A sense of lostness
Overwhelms

Now love resides
In separate realms

CV
02.12.23
Categories: lostness, anxiety, friendship love,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberLiminal - Two Worlds

The space in-between
Two worlds
When we transition 
From dreamland
To harsh reality
That moment
When you are
Neither here
Nor there
Traversing
The barrier
Crossing 
The line
Stepping in
Stepping out
Over the threshold 
Negotiating the border
The ready, steady
Before the go
The rising red curtain
Before the show
Liminal lostness
The uncomfortable
Homeless
Non-place
The wilderness of un-belonging
The chrysalis of transformation
The journey has begun
Simultaneously ending
Over we go..
Through we push
Pay the ferryman 
See you on the other side
Mind the Gap
Categories: lostness, absence, adventure, baptism, bereavement,
Form: Free verse

Dreams

Oh how difficult it is to find purpose
Longing for the day I find mines
The truth of all this wandering
I can't seem to find my own
Own way of life, own way of knowing
Of the times that make me happy 
I am aging in every minute 
But the songs just won't produce
I am building a life of lostness
Of finding a source in this mystery we call life
Others seem to have find it so easily
Yet their journey isn't unfolded
Oh how I envy these people 
where they've gone where I want to go
And I am seeking to find that place
where I can finally say "I made it!" 
Oh how it is difficult to see the path
But I am trying and I am finding
That this road is hard for anyone 
I can't be the only one!
I am yet to finding my calling 
So I can say that I have tried 
With this dream that may
Someday
Be Reality.
Categories: lostness, anxiety, change, feelings, growing
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberDealing With Fear

Throughout the years, most fears for family
have been dispelled by their firm guarantee
that they’ll make right decisions, that they’ll be
okay! Since I’m not always worry-free,
I pray for them. I know God hears my plea.

Though with good health, I’m blessed, I must confess
with rush of years, at times I must address   
some issues, for I know if I suppress
my fears, my health will suffer. This duress,
with prayer and doctor’s visits, is much less.

When I feared for the future of my soul,
no doctor or loved one could take control.
The knowledge of my lostness took its toll.
The Holy Spirit filled the unique role
of drawing me to Jesus, with the goal
of saving me. The Lord then made me whole.

   **************************

Though many place deep trust in God and man,
I don’t believe there’s even ONE who can 
transcend all fears that rise up in the span
of life, can every stab of anguish ban. 


August 21, 2021
entered in the Fear Transcendence contest
Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker
Categories: lostness, fear,
Form: Rhyme


I Love God's Goodness

In my lostness, you came as light to me ...
Where next should I be lost to get only Thee
Categories: lostness, allegory, allusion, appreciation, god,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberThe Sound of Being Told Goodbye

Goodbye leaves an emptiness inside
it feels like an ache so hard to describe
only by experiencing it can one know
the lostness and loneliness to ascribe

Thinking of the words goodbye itself
is there anything about it that's good?
bye has a finality about it so real
it means an end to what has stood

In all our life's we've spoken these words
so very often and without a thought
not realising the effect it can  have
on many persons the misery it's brought

There's a sound that fills the air
much of it so polluted leaving a mark
like a sharp knife with a real cutting edge
cuts the material off instantly all so dark

But one day there's a final goodbye
to life here as we all; know it
then the creator will ask the ultimate
did you believe truly? if not you can't sit!
Categories: lostness, life, social, sound,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMy Response To Rumi

For years you’ve heard others describe
what they call “getting saved,” accepting 
Jesus Christ as their personal Savior.
You’ve listened with great interest,
been moved by their sincerity,
and have wished (but only briefly)
to have what they say they have,		
all while lacking full understanding.
Sometimes you feel confused,
envious, even angry. You cannot
yet have what they possess, for
you lack a special knowledge they
once had—realization of lostness.

If you want to be found,
you must see that you are LOST.

December 14, 2016

"If you desire healing,
let yourself fall ill
let yourself fall ill."    Jalaluddin Rumi


entered in Brian Strand's Springtime Premium Contest on May 18, 2017
Categories: lostness, faith, jesus,
Form: Free verse

Over the Dead Body

Grim, hollow, pointless
Walk limping through its lostness
For a name he is clueless
For a past he is dreamless

His insight is only some bored routinity
Which is stuck in the airport of dead society
Killing time like it never be killed
Living a live like it never be lived

An ambush to the stadium of shelter
Was a breakthrough for the unexpected trigger
One brain consumed by the hand of a ripper
Its cerebellum emit clear memories about the lover

An outstanding memories 
Led the soulless to its side of humanities
Longing of past, stages of life
Belated hunger stop to strive

A girl with her sweet adventure
A dead body whose lost in his picture
Rely on their fate to each other
But blind in the shimmer of their clutter

Through the memory which righteously read as a diary
Through the features which bring him to the life ready
Through the whisper
Through the struggle

He entitled for the second chance
He deserved for the right romance
The new life is just waiting 
To the next chapter of the beginning

Author's Note:
Inspired by the book of "Warm Bodies"- Isaac Marion.
Categories: lostness, adventure, death, inspirational, life,
Form: Prose Poetry

A Lament

I have swallowed the poison...
suffered through darkness.
I have tasted the ashes,
lived in utter lostness.

I remember the pain
when hitting bottom;
desperate I dreaded,
what I had become.

To be punished for sin,
how dare I complain!
Is The Lord not my life
from whence I came?

I have entered The Light!
My Soul has been taken.
God proves to be Faithful,
To The called He's awakened!


Milton L. Delgado
Inspired By The Book of Lamentations
Chapter 3
October 20, 2006
Categories: lostness, death, depression, devotion, faith,
Form: Prose Poetry
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