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Premium Member The End Is Here I Still Praise God In This Year of 2038

THE END IS HERE I STILL PRAISE GOD IN THIS YEAR OF 2038


The year is 2038
And in this year of 2038
Some people yet still find it odd
That me and others yet still are praising God
Well, that's a job in part..WELL DONE
Babies are born in
Come from heaven
Replenishing the dying out elderly
Social security now history
Misused and depleted in 2019
Disappeared ran solvent by governmental means
New age still new old age no more
The beast says take his mark
If you wanna eat anymore
Well there were to many sparrows, pigeons, dandelion grass and squirrels
Won't be a sell out 
I'm fed and fill in Christ
In this year of 2038
Some people yet still find it odd
That me and others yet still are praising God
Stand don't run, don't fall flee the devil
Seek Christ our Lord and God
For He shall provide all
One world rule, you fool this world is God's
We (you're) just a caretaker
Human still do those foolish things, foolish thing
Some people find it off
That I'm still praising God
You know I would rather see His face is peace and grace
Be on the mercy seat
Than to see His face condemn and be placed on His judgement seat
Hope is less more is no more
Being satisfied no more blessed
I can't relate
Man still conceited
Things He's all that I can't relate
Help this world Savoir
My God it's 2038
It's 2038


10/18/18
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. ©2018


Footloose

I'm footloose and fancy free.
My youngest daughter is twenty one.
I've just returned from having fun.
Visiting each and every one.

Isn't it bliss to see them grown?
Fully formed adults on their own.
Confident, carefree, full of plans.
Before they settle with a man.

A job well done, I can relax.
Think of only me in fact.
The pitter patter of tiny feet.
Will be the next I have to greet.

I'm not a grandma yet, oh no!
Now is my time to let go.
Travel a little, while I can.
Perhaps meet a new man.

It's a nice way to be, fancy free.
After a life of dedication.
Now it's time for meditation.
Relax, breathe, rejuvenation.


29/04/2017

For Fancy Free contest.
Form: Bio

A Lanterns Thought

In the hours of the evil colour,
When the sun has turn its back,
When that far away fluorescent circle is not enough to see yourself,
When everywhere looks like when it has never been,
Then my use again becomes of need
Perfect relief when you open that closet,
Sweet sensation when you open my heart,
Good feeling when I'm lit up and I become your companion again.
 Hey friend, I've waited so long,
You sitting on the chair and I on the desk before you,
Don't you miss holding me up,
To see what just your eyes wouldn't see?
Don't you love when you found the body ornament you seek, when I've shared you my light?
I sooth you with warmth in the cold
The beautiful shadows I cast on the wall, they can never exaggerate how perfect you're built.
Tho thine eyes beholds it not, believe me,
My dark smoke goes up there, conjures a genie
Granting some of your wishes.
Too bad, it can't grant it all
Cos someday my use may get obsolete to you, 
While you get a better alternative, 
And cast me away. 

 My lord, forever do I want the bright little fire in my heart to dance,
Dance for you even till the day.
I always wished, I could stay near you, 
Watch you read, watch you sleep.
When I burn out, will you pour me inspiration?
Will you clean me?
Will you caress me in gratitude when you've got the cap?
Will you whisper to me job well done?
I'll love you to watch when my fire dance for you,
When it forms the love shape,
Will you let it amuse and inspire you.
The fire in my heart burns for you.
I am your muse,  your *lantern* .

Premium Member The Fry Day Lenten Fish

Lenten Fry day is a nice day for fish 
Witch was Peter’s holiest wish 
They came from all around 
When they heard that faith full sound 
Into the net they swam without worry or a frown  

During this biblical turf war battle 
In the desert without any cattle 
Peter made a nice dime 
Using a fishing pole and a good line 

This was the almighty’s will 
Giving Peter this type of skill
Using bait and rod 
The underwater cuisine was a message from God  
Back on land 
In the region filled with heat and sand 
The tension continued to worsen 
And Peter still made a fishing fortune 

It was the Romans who were threaten 
Thinking this small group of gypsies were out to get them 
Success for those who thought they were blessed 
Might have been the reason the Romans decided to go through with the arrest.
As we celebrate lent 
Without repent that only breeds individuals to resent 
Let us remember those few who stood tall 
When the Romans out of control egos made the deadly call 
Making our pioneer leaders to state our Messiah took the fall 
Due to the Romans power play law 
Every Friday during this spiritual time 
When you gather with the need to dine 
Make a sacrifice of that tenderloin that has a price 
And enjoy the seafood 
That was God’s instrument and tool 
Saturday hour will come 
And it will be all right to grill the steak rare or well done 
But if you take one day to say no to the meat 
Then allow Saint Pete to offer the treat 
That delectable T Bone spending Saturday Night on your dish 
Will be as wonderful as that Lenten Fry day fish
Form: Rhyme

Three Lions Lost With Pride Restored

Sad yet proud

But the scoreline doesn't lie

Football is not coming home

But this time with a sense of pride 

Not in disgust and shame 

But the fact remains 

We still lost 

But all is not lost for once

At least we had or gave it a real go

And we finally at last have something to build on and grow

So hey ho onwards and upwards 

The cupboard is no longer bare

And for once the whole country finally cares

More hope for the future than nightmares 

Well done to all the Lads 

Its not all bad

At last you have done your Nation Proud

Football may not be coming home 

But when you do

You can hold you head up high

All we ever wanted or expected 

You gave us , you may have lost but at least you tried

You have finally restored the 3 Lions Pride


Dr King

The question so many have asked 
What are we doing for others ?? 
Are we making a change 
Are we letting? What was work so hard to go in vain?
We used to have morals 
We used to have a heart 
This world ?? is slowly falling apart 
We used to look out 
For one another 
We use use to be able to depend on our sister and brother
Seems like everything now has become a competition 
From the beginning ?? to end 
Seems like no one wants to  see anyone win 
Friends turning on friends 
We really got to get it together 
Young people no longer  respect the elders 
So many things happening on the day to day basis 
So many families with crying faces 
Talking it out and communicating seems like it's no longer a thing 
Did we really listen to his dream ?? 
I meant Dr Martin Luther King 
Did you listen to him 
Did you hear him out 
He wanted to make a change 
Didn't do it for clout 
He made a way for a new to way to begin 
We got to figure it out 
He had a vision 
He saw it through 
He tried to make the world better for me and you 
Sacrifices were made 
By our tribe 
Believe it or not 
You can still thrive 
It was also said 
"One day we will learn that the heart can never be totally right 
When the head is totally wrong " 
We have to push through 
And become tough and strong 
Right your wrongs 
Make your wrongs back right 
Do it for you, continue to fight
Don't fight with your hands fight with the knowledge you've learned over time 
Create new visions 
See them out this time 
Dream big 
No matter how hard it seems 
DR.KING also said "no one has the right to rain on your dreams ."
We shall overcome 
We have overcame 
We shall walk hand and hand 
For we are all the same 
Color doesn't define 
We are all one of a kind 
Theres so much more that I  could say 
Thanks Dr King for paving the way 
Little girls and little boys 
You guys are the future 
Dream big 
Don't stop 
Give it all you got 
And if you can give a little more 
Acts of service are always an open door 
Doesn't matter if it's a smile or a helping hand 
Be a part of a great plan 
We salute ?? 
Yes we do
Thank you Dr King 
For all you've done 
We celebrate you today 
Job well done .

Written by Concetta Hardnett 
01/20/2025

Premium Member Is There a Doctor In the House

Dr rictus smile hilary jones been on gmb a while; well a long old time anyway'
Had the craic with Rod Humphris writer of the Simon Ellis genre, series
Also landlord of raven pub;  in Bath the city; couldn't really understand Jones clear
Derided Rod with a line about dirty beer? as his science weren't up to much as such
First he was giving it out, like he owned each if and but , then said look we doc's are
Still just learning here,  only when the cameras turned away from Rod thats clear'
A gang of three of gmb made noise, but no great case that any would see'
Well done Rod, take it in large thanks from so many!
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Treasonous Rats Escape Justice For Now

For one I cannot understand 
the mentality abandoning logic and reasoning 
Firstly within the people of this island 
cutting the allowance for those with disabilities 
this should be slammed as an attack on the most vulnerable 

Where doctors preforming abortions get a big pay rise 
and the government also getting rewarded for a job well done 
Pat on his back spineless everything we stand for charity wise 
it has gone out the window within none christian lawless brats 
in such manners that attacks anyone that supports the vulnerable cause 
these liberal ideas where knowledge is concerned 
has lost the plot with bad backward peddling political skills

when it comes to speaking the truth lets boil it to the bone 
when our tax money is used to butcher the innocent 
this island has lost all backbone to voice opposition 
we should bring the capital to a complete standstill 
and call this government under civil rights for what they are 

To step down from power in the non democratically elected seats 
those they claim to hold against the ballot traitors 
the good people are sick of those that push sin as natural law
corrupt every last one of you are to the core 
which digs down into the root of all evil 
take a good look at your soul purpose drawn before your fall

We Got this

We got this 

We got this 
Even We feel like we don't 
Giving up is not an option 
Even when you feel it, you won't 
Because you grounded 
In God 
He  will help you 
When things get hard 
He's waiting for you to speak 
Open your eyes 
It's time to seek 
Seek his love and his grace 
To succeed in a place 
A place of comfort 
And a place where he 
Can show us 
He's all we need 

We got this 
Yes, we do 
Look to God 
He'll see us through 
(Repeat 1x)

Have you ever felt 
By yourself 
Felt like you needed help 
You would call friends 
No one picked up
Then you start feeling stuck 
You heard a voice 
From within
That told you 
To rise beyond your troubles 
Im ready to bless you double 
I know you hurt 
But I am here 
To ease away some of those tears ?? 
You got this 
Yes, you do 
I am the beginning, the end, and the truth 
You are the supply 
And I am the Demand 
Show them you are apart of God's plan 

We got this 
Yes, we do 
Look to God 
He'll see us through 
(Repeat 1x)

Bridge 
Look at how far you've come 
You are doing 
Good 
Job well done 
There will be days 
When your emotions get in the way 
Look to the Lord 
Keep the Faith 
Imma say it once and imma say it Loud 
Imma do everything to make my Mom Proud!!!!

We got this 
Yes, we do 
Look to God 
He'll see us through 
(Repeat until chorus fades )
Written by Concetta Hardnett 
05/26/2025

Lifescape

See where I started,
in the garden of my childhood.
Fenced around with parents
hedged in with strict convention.

Walk with me.

The bare hills of ambition from my youth
lead upward, onward, overlooking
crowds and earthbound throngs.
Climb the eroding pathway to the top
whence with far-ranging envy see,
mocking,
the high peaks of distant mountains,
unattainable,
glitter their silvered summits.

Stand on these cliffs and wonder
as the seabirds plunge and soar
like hopes and aspirations
tempting disaster as fate's breakers
beat upon the rocks of past mistakes.

Walk on the clifftop, if you dare;
the tightrope of success;
never relaxing concentration,
risking the headlong plunge
from heaven to hell slowed only,
if you're lucky,
by the outstretched hand of friendship.

Now wander through these quiet woods
of contemplation,
restful and green with peaceful glades.
Soft birdsong filters shafts of sunlit
understanding,
bringing into wondering view
the undergrowth of hidden imaginings.

Sit for a while, for a short season's warmth
beside this running brook of happiness
and listen to its peaceful trills
contrapuntal to the murmured sounds
of slow, contented summer,
tranquil in a lover's arms beneath
the frantic beauty of the skylark's song.

Descend these nameless, slippery paths
that lead through the dark places
to the chasms,
to the lonely depths of black despair
where midnight terrors lurk
in deep, dank caves of restless sleep
and every monster's shadow looms
large and overbearing.

I offer you no final resting place,
no welcoming tavern for a lifetime's thirst,
no sheltered bungalow to care for
after work well done.
Only a cross-roads in a barren place
where a blind fingerpost
hints at unseen directions,
untravelled paths with unknown travellers
crossing.

Walk with me.

Kim James

26/5/95
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